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Old 08-06-2008, 03:25 AM Constructive Criticism Please
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Hey all,

I'm starting up a little design company slash portfolio site and came up with this.

www.pixelpunkcreative.com

Does it work? Anything you would add, change, subtract...? Opinions are greatly appreciated.
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Old 08-06-2008, 03:50 AM Re: Constructive Criticism Please
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Hello,

I like the splash screen over all. One suggestion that comes to mind right off the bat. I'm not sure how it would look but what if you do the same effect on the first p as you did on the second one. Just to see how it looks it might trigger something else in your brain. Also, it's kinda hard on the eyes. I'm not sure if its because its 1:49 A.M. where I'm from and I'm sleepy or its the colors. Maybe try a black background and really set the bright pinks, purples and yellows off. I hope I was helpful.
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Old 08-06-2008, 04:42 AM Re: Constructive Criticism Please
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Hello,

I like the splash screen over all. One suggestion that comes to mind right off the bat. I'm not sure how it would look but what if you do the same effect on the first p as you did on the second one. Just to see how it looks it might trigger something else in your brain. Also, it's kinda hard on the eyes. I'm not sure if its because its 1:49 A.M. where I'm from and I'm sleepy or its the colors. Maybe try a black background and really set the bright pinks, purples and yellows off. I hope I was helpful.
Thanks Pixel!

You know, I tried adding the mohawk to both p's, but I thought it threw off the center-balance of the logo. What do you think?

As far as colors go. I'm going to use a little bit of a darker background for the site. Some else mentioned to me that there's too much contrast between the pink, purple and white. I could also use more muted colors instead.

Thanks for the input.
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Old 08-20-2008, 08:43 PM Re: Constructive Criticism Please
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just from initial first glance, the first impression i get is 1) this is pretty cool 2) its a little too colorful... (tie-die-ish) .

otherwise, "two thumbs up"
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