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Please review my animated banner !
Old 06-02-2009, 07:31 PM Please review my animated banner !
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I have used photoshop for a fair bit now, allthough i think there still are lots to learn about it.

Please let me know what you think of my animated banner for the games website, its a pretty rich banner, i opted to not go for the simplistic type.

Not sure about the text at the end, driving me insane, any suggestions ?

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Old 06-06-2009, 02:25 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Honestly speaking, the font style is not good. Also, the flashing text doesn't look good as well.
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Old 06-07-2009, 07:28 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Really its not much good. You need to learn a lot to make a good banner.

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Old 06-07-2009, 10:47 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Hello Charles,

Besides what the other two members mentioned, the white blobs coming out of the shooting guns doesn't look realistic, for me it takes away from the graphic. I can see where you have put some thought into the graphic.......
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Old 06-07-2009, 04:03 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Yeah true thanks for feedback its a bit too big and lumpy anyway, designing a much simpler logo which will fit in better also.

Was great fun to make tho!
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Old 06-10-2009, 01:08 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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..improve the color combination..
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Old 06-10-2009, 11:08 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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try making it simple. and the font style and flashing texts are not that good. i know you can make a better one. post it again and we'll give feedbacks
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Old 06-22-2009, 09:21 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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I will honestly say that the clarity of the image is not good at all
you need to make it more sharp and nice, the font also seems to be not good at all
please try to modify it and then you can share it with a review again
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Old 06-26-2009, 03:59 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Sorry, man.

Normally when your new to designing you're not that great. Often helps to read tutorials on that matter, or to view a great design (can't remember any now).


If I were to see this banner I'd completely ignore it. I can hardly read it and it looks like some sort of pornography. What's with the white dude anyway?
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Old 07-14-2009, 02:05 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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font is really hard to read, especially that quick! Whats with the low res?
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Old 07-14-2009, 06:48 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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way too much going on without getting the point across. Remember sometimes less is more. As opposed to this maybe try some bold lettering with a symbol/logo to the right or left to represent the point of the banner flashing would be efficient.
With all due respect there is no balance in this ad you know. Try sticking with 3 -4 colors and focusing on the point than on random art.
Good luck!
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Old 07-15-2009, 03:30 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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i think its good start. but you have to more learn about the Font choice. and the position of there. And make sure that for banner, especially when u create animation, that the speed of the frame. when your gun spot is moving it looks busy.

But Good Start..

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Old 07-18-2009, 01:54 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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My opinion is color is not ok.it is too much dark, but animations and idea of your banner very attractive.
Well done.
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Old 07-18-2009, 03:28 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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I think the way you've made the animations are freaking great, I always mess them up in Photoshop howver the image itself is not so good. Maybe you should try changing the colours and the text?
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Old 07-18-2009, 08:43 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Good job, but it show me very slow.
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Old 07-19-2009, 06:55 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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I'm not really a fan of it
I just think youhave overdone the text effects and i'm not really keen on the animation either. Sorry
But keep it up, you'll make better things in no time!
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Old 07-19-2009, 09:27 PM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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plus the banner file size is way too big for a banner you need to make the file size of the banner like just 100kb to load faster.
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Old 07-24-2009, 04:52 AM Re: Please review my animated banner !
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Ya you have to do work on color combination. Other things are looking ok.
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