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Old 09-26-2006, 11:22 AM My photomanipulation...
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I know it has flaws, but it was constructed from quite a few photos, rendered, not to mention the moon, which is 100% hand made. I am not sure about duplicating a girl been a good idea, what do u think?

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Old 09-26-2006, 12:13 PM Re: My photomanipulation...
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how about cropping off the left side so that the moon is in left hand corner and just the one girl on the right?

nice artwork

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Old 09-27-2006, 11:58 AM Re: My photomanipulation...
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thanks for your comment... i actually thought that the moon, as been the leitmotif, should be centered.. what do u think?
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Old 09-27-2006, 03:09 PM Re: My photomanipulation...
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how about cropping off the left side so that the moon is in left hand corner and just the one girl on the right?

nice artwork

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you took the words right out of my mouth. Yeah, this would look tight as a perfect square.

centering the brightest object draws my eye to it and only it...putting it to the bottom right makes it seem less important and then i figure to look around at everything else.

Nice piece.
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Old 09-28-2006, 12:30 AM Re: My photomanipulation...
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Very nice work! I'm new here, so I don't really know how much effect my opinion would have, but there are a couple things that come to my attention when looking at this piece.

Obviously, the moon is bright and is therefore a light source. It would be more realistic to see the light from the moon reflected more on the water and in other places. While the moon's reflection in the water is a nice touch, it leaves alot to be desired in realism. The water isn't really perfectly smooth, so the reflection shouldn't be either. Also, the light color seems a bit off. The color of your background photo is a really warm, oranges and reds and its balanced with the cooler violets. The moon is a cool white color and yet is surrounded by the warm colors... Its a minor thing, of course...
Minor gripes, but if corrected this picture could be 10x more amazing!
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Old 09-30-2006, 02:20 PM Re: My photomanipulation...
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thanks mac_mogul, i am flattered that the first post u made here was dedicated to me

thanks everyone for the feedback and the suggestions, will look into it when i am slightly less busy and try to make a second eclipse
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Old 11-20-2006, 10:21 AM Re: My photomanipulation...
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I think that if you moved the white signature from the left girl's dress to the right one and crop the left girl out. My eyes were drawn to the moon and the riht side, as the right side is better lit than the dimmer left side.
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