Blog Reviews

**micoblanco** · 08:07 PM

This is my newly created blog.
Online Auction Shopping

I'll very appreciate all your comments and suggestions on how I can improve my blog. Thanks!

**JohnDiamond** · 11-03-2008, 08:15 PM

I like the content though I'm wondering what it has to do with Online Auction? Did you put the content simply to test your design?

**The-Pixel** · 11-03-2008, 09:49 PM

Hello,

Overall I think you have a very solid start. It's a bit dark - I can see for some people that being an issue. Best of luck.

**micoblanco** · 11-04-2008, 07:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JohnDiamond

I like the content though I'm wondering what it has to do with Online Auction? Did you put the content simply to test your design?

Really? Did you like the content? hehe I'm very happy that someone like you liked my blog.

Quote:

Originally Posted by The-Pixel

Hello,

Overall I think you have a very solid start. It's a bit dark - I can see for some people that being an issue. Best of luck.

Thanks for your suggestion and I'm very happy that you've said that "very solid start". hehe

Best of luck to all of us.

**journey08** · 07:31 AM

Like the design of the template. It looks nice. I also like the Christmas gifts images you've included on your auction blog.

**scotteryboy** · 11-18-2008, 11:03 AM

I dont quite understand why there are posts relating to maria sharapova when the blog is about online auctions?

**creydesign** · 11-20-2008, 04:53 PM

The biggest thing you need to do is get a handle on the text. There is way to much of it and it's way too cluttered.

First off, give the text some line-height, which is the space between lines of text. That will help readability.

Then, divide the text into paragraphs. Right now, all that text will not be read. Web copy needs to be scannable.

**damoonica** · 12-02-2008, 10:35 PM

try to use a lighter color
put an description at the top of your blog page and let it be there cause you have not a common content and it must be described

**AD7863** · 12-09-2008, 09:26 AM

The design is pretty good but some of the stuff on the website isnt properly aligned. I would give it a 6/10

**natandy** · 12-10-2008, 07:12 AM

hi) it looks really very nice, i think u have a talent))

**informixx** · 12-10-2008, 11:08 AM

i made my first blog last August and it's still running up to now though not maintained properly

**kingofsanda** · 12-20-2008, 10:54 PM

You are off to a good start, the template and the page layout is nice but I think the blog is too dark I think it would look better if you add a few more colors into the color scheme.