I know you are probably looking for suggestion on the design, but you should brush up on your grammar skills. Also, I'm sure you will get better at this as you go, but your articles do not evoke any emotion and are kind of boring to read. Most of your sentences are in simple form, which can contribute to the boringness of the reading.
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You may think that putting music video is cool and enhances your readers’ web experience. But, what you think might not be true. Some music videos play automatically without requiring any click. That means you provide no option to your readers whether want to listen to music or not. Why you want to force your readers to listen to certain music?
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I pulled this from one of your articles. You could easily combine some of the sentence, consequently achieving two favorable results.
1. Better Readability
2. Less Text (more is only better if it's quality)
Note: Also you should avoid the use of the word "you". Write in generals, not directives, unless you are speaking directly to your reader, such as a question.
i.e you could say:
Some webmasters believe that just because they enjoy music videos on their site, their visitors will too. This is not always the case, as some of these features which are thought to enhance a visitor's web experience, simply turn out to be a nuisance to most. For example, some of these music videos play automatically without the permission of the visitor. Do you think that everyone who visits a certain website enjoys the exact same genre of music?
Okay, so we've got readability, but no way to evoke emotion. Your content needs some personality (especially in a blog) that your frequent readers will recognize and appreciate as solely yours.
For example, say you were writing an article on how the best methods to rid your PC of spyware. In a boring article you could say:
What is the best way to get rid of your spyware?
You need to find a good spyware program which can find all of the spyware on your PC and delete it.
In an article with some personality and emotion you could say:
How can you tell spyware to take it's job and shove it?
You need some kick-butt software that will have even the most malicious spyware cowering in the corner, praying for your program to spare its' life!
Now that example evokes emotion and with a consistent writing personality, your reader know what to expect from you, and will most likely appreciate your content and come back for more.
And why not monetize your article by linking to a well-known spyware remover software that has affiliate program.
I hope you will take this into consideration. Remember, practice makes perfect.
gl,
Bryan
