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**HeidiLynn** · 09-04-2002, 04:03 AM

This will also be in my upcoming ebook. At least if I can stop writing long enough to quit having to add to it.

Untitled For Now
© Drachewyn

If my mind could recall
what my heart once knew
I no doubt would fall
in love with only you

But the pain descended
severing the ties there
All hope of love ended
alone without a prayer

And my mind wanders around
striving to change destiny
rise to the higher ground
out of hands of futility

If my heart could recall
the sanity it once knew
I no doubt would fall
in love with only you

But the strain descended
severing the ties that bound
All despair of ties mended
dying inside without a sound

And my heart wanders around
striving to change destiny
rise to the higher ground
out of hands of futility

**iqchicken** · 09-04-2002, 11:13 PM

nice.. but depressing...

**HeidiLynn** · 09-05-2002, 01:00 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by iqchicken
nice.. but depressing...

ha ha ha yeah some of my closest friends said the same thing.
thanks

**iqchicken** · 09-05-2002, 09:36 AM

it does make me want to put guitar chords to it though..

**DaveMo~** · 09-05-2002, 09:48 AM

Remember, there's always hope!

If my mind could recall
what my heart once knew
I no doubt would fall
in love with only you

but..........

then.........

If my heart could recall
the sanity it once knew
I no doubt would fall
in love with only you

If is such a "big" word, but a word nonetheless. And "if", just like miracles, happen!

Dave

While there's breath, there's HOPE!

**MaiBalz** · 09-06-2002, 08:33 PM

hey nice poem Drach.
you know i got one of my poems published and didnt even think it was that good they thought it was great. Here it is:

Theres no words that describe friendship.
Friendship, friendship is lika a gold chain-

it is beautiful, valuable, and most of all,

it wont waste.

Friendship, friendship is like a park-a

place where intimate feelings are shared and

never forgotten.

Friendship, friendship is like the sea-it

has it's bad times and it's waves but it is

always appreciated no matter what.

Friendship, friendship is like a car- it

moves on, and the longer you have it the

more you appreciate it.

Friendship, friendship is like the color

yellow-it is bright, shiny, and full with

joy.

Friendship, friendship is something that can

be seen but can't be touched,friendship is a

feeling that doesn't have words that can

describe it.

Ede Ortega

Copyright ©2002 Edel Ortega

**DaveMo~** · 09-06-2002, 09:39 PM

Hi Mai,

Welcome to the forums. I hope you enjoy your stay here.

Dave

**ghettocars** · 09-07-2002, 08:41 AM

edel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
holy crap, i didnt think youd join! when did you make that poem. youve never told me you made it...

glad to see you here.

hopefully im talking to the right edel here.

by teh notes of your sig i think you are.