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Ok thanks for everyones entry.... it's feedback time...
reyres
Still great work there. I know I told you the blue didnt fit but the yellow is a little too bright which makes it hard to read against white. Maybe orange for an inbetween option.. duno?
Gx3 Grafix
I'm very impressed with this one, I like the whole idea of the slim bodily shape there, and the tape measure is a great touch. I did see it in black and white before you removed it and it also looked great. My only worry is that the circle/image is out of proportion to the text? .. but maybe you will tackle that in the horizontal version you mentioned.
ninjax
Oh - maybe I got the dimensions wrong, now matter continue as you are I can just scale it after anyway no worries. Thanks for pointing that out. I like your logo but I'm not a fan of the numbers in the heart.. maybe remove the number and drag the text so it starts in the centre of the heart instead? Also the tag line font is a bit 'too fun' in this case i think. Thanks for you great entry.
bigrival
This one i love - a nice unique idea with the dumbbell and your text looks clear/pro... thats great. Also it looks great in black and white. My only worry here is that becuase the dumbbell is quite a big weight, i mean that looks like it must be 20-30kg... it makes the theme seem more weight/strengh focused than anything else, maybe someone make it more generic to fitness? I do really like how you have moved away from the health heart idea and worked with the exercise idea though, its real good. The first one you made was also great and similar to this latest one though I'm not too sure what the shape is, seems a bit random?
whoosh
I'm liking your entry a lot! The text is easy to read, and gives a very sleak pro look. The only concerns i have is that the green is a little off from the site? Have you pasting it into that screen shot i put up? Maybe it works and I havent seen it.. il paste it in later it may worth very well... im actully hesitent for you to change that green because it does actually look really good... and looks great in grey, and also in black. The bit im unsure about is the circle .... i think it looks good but maybe lose the tick marks on 12, 3, 6 and 9 and make the circle a bit smaller/closer to the 247?
Anyway I hope I have given the feedback you were all looking for... your ideas are great...If I were to chose a design right now it would be hard, as there are some good ideas out there.
Catch up with you soon,
Sir P
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