Thanks for the feedback

Hi, here's my revision

I did a bit of research before entering. I found out that the pain in the arm often causes the arm to burn up (inflammation). So I thought of having an arm that is being treated by someone with ice, which is the treatment for it. Maybe even different race colors for universal use, multi-racial.

Everything here is a vector and can be made bigger or smaller for branding and so on.

ymk, that actually looks like the guy is punching his arm.

Okay - here's another attempt... figures removed because I couldn't think of any other way to put their arms other than up. :-P

Trying to convey "network" with this one...


Different font for "You're not alone":


Different font for "Thoracic Outlet Syndrome Support Group Network":

Originally Posted by Ninjax

ymk, that actually looks like the guy is punching his arm.

ha ha..After looking at it again, you're right, Ninjax.

I'll make a revision.

Hi Everyone,
I have to apologize for the delay in my response. I'm not getting all my emails from new posts so if I don't remember to check it....

Anyway, katesy, I'm definitely liking the yellow figure instead of the orange. Still not to sure about the world. Can you take out the world all together and just leave the word "hope" in there. Also can you make the font like the top one on this sample but keep it the same colors you have now. And my last request but it's more of asking your opinion.... I'm a little worried that the dark font won't show up on my darker skins, can I easily change the color of the font in photoshop?

You're doing an amazing job Kates! Thanks so much.

Originally Posted by katesrobyn

Hi, here's my revision

Media King
First, I want to thank you for taking the time to look up TOS! TOS is a condition of the upper chest, neck, shoulder, arm and hand. Symptoms are vast and sometimes life and limb threatening with clots and aneurysms so I think depicting just the arm wouldn't work. Burning is just one of many symptoms of TOS and it's also a symptoms of RSD as well. I really like the racial diversity as well. That appeals to me a lot. And the obvious, my first thought was that someone was getting punched in the arm and "ouch". LOL

Can't wait to see what else you come up with Thanks so much!

Originally Posted by yourmediaking

I did a bit of research before entering. I found out that the pain in the arm often causes the arm to burn up (inflammation). So I thought of having an arm that is being treated by someone with ice, which is the treatment for it. Maybe even different race colors for universal use, multi-racial.

Everything here is a vector and can be made bigger or smaller for branding and so on.

Hey Josh,
Liking the second one. Can you make the Thoracic Outlet... all blue and the the "your not alone" only capitalized on the first word. Thanks so much for this.

Originally Posted by JoshChris

Okay - here's another attempt... figures removed because I couldn't think of any other way to put their arms other than up. :-P

Trying to convey "network" with this one...


Different font for "You're not alone":


Different font for "Thoracic Outlet Syndrome Support Group Network":

Thanks for the feedback, charlie. I'll post my revision soon.

Here's the latest.... I made background variations, font will be given, upon winning

i'm using part of chest as human body.

So I made some changes to my ironic first attempt.

But here's my revision. I show a man only waist up. I just want to show the problematic areas, where the illness actually occurs. Neck, chest, abdomen, arms & hands. Again, a bit of racial diversity and a helping hand for support.

Here's an abstract idea, let me know what you think.



Thanks!
Ryan

Per your feedback:



Please let me know if you want anything else changed. Everything is customizable and I can come up with a new logo (aside from the yellow network circle) if you want.

HI IMG
Like the font dont' change anything with font. As far as icon.. Hummm. like the colors. Can you change the orange to a nice happy yellow, remove the circle in the foreground the the black depicted the seperation of the arms. Can you put a globe in the middle where the white inner circle is and another logo with the words "TOS Hope" in the middle? Excellent for first go around. I see you were paying attention

Originally Posted by IM3D

i'm using part of chest as human body.

HI Media
Like it .. NO changes

Originally Posted by yourmediaking

So I made some changes to my ironic first attempt.

But here's my revision. I show a man only waist up. I just want to show the problematic areas, where the illness actually occurs. Neck, chest, abdomen, arms & hands. Again, a bit of racial diversity and a helping hand for support.

Hi Ryan, actually this is an excellent abstract and the logo has a very corporate feel. It's not really very welcoming and it's doesn't depict 'togetherness" much. I do worry about the trademark ability of such a simple logo. Let me see what else you got but please keep this in your files. I may need it for another project.

Originally Posted by Ryan ™

Here's an abstract idea, let me know what you think.



Thanks!
Ryan

Not like the icon fill. Prefered it white. The rest looks great.

Originally Posted by JoshChris

Per your feedback:



Please let me know if you want anything else changed. Everything is customizable and I can come up with a new logo (aside from the yellow network circle) if you want.

Hi Kates,
Can you take out the words in the middle and let me see how that looks) ALso I talked with my people and they want the text to be more like Goodsearch. I'm sorry.... this was just brought to my attention this afternoon.

Originally Posted by katesrobyn

Here's the latest.... I made background variations, font will be given, upon winning