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$40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
06-15-2009, 02:49 AM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Actually I considered putting the tooth in a car, but then that's not very environmentally friendly. So you want to "remove Hygiene Care Inc."?
I personally think you have a few great mascots to choose from that are sort of opposites, maybe you can incorporate both into like a team?
Anyways, I think Kate or I don't need to actually need to change the design, we can just create quick variations (web version, print version, fax version).
@Kate - was just a little joke, I think your design is great =)
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06-15-2009, 04:26 AM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Name: Josh
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another quick idea. still have a couple of more designs

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06-15-2009, 10:01 AM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Hylith
Actually I considered putting the tooth in a car, but then that's not very environmentally friendly. So you want to "remove Hygiene Care Inc."?
I personally think you have a few great mascots to choose from that are sort of opposites, maybe you can incorporate both into like a team?
Anyways, I think Kate or I don't need to actually need to change the design, we can just create quick variations (web version, print version, fax version).
@Kate - was just a little joke, I think your design is great =)
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That would be great if you could just use the existing work and create variations that will be easy on print and fax especially. So strip down the gradients to a level tolerable to halftone instead of 256 grayscale. Thanks.
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06-15-2009, 10:05 AM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Originally Posted by JG Graphics
another quick idea. still have a couple of more designs

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Thanks JG.
1. You have a heavy border around everything, please reduce it by at least half.
2. Color doesn't match the website template, put future work on white background please.
3. Not sure about this typeface, try something more conventional and old fashion that would appeal to (easier to read by) old people and corporate type?
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06-15-2009, 10:10 AM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Here everyone, for your convenience, I have attached a screenshot of the website template. Please make sure the color theme you pick matches the template.
You can try green, in which case please alter the website template's brownish red to coincide.
Thanks.
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06-15-2009, 12:55 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 53
Name: Josh
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im doing more font variations.
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06-15-2009, 01:08 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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And make it smaller please Josh. I would say by about half.
Personally I am not too comfortable with that tooth, looks a bit intimidating (from a patient's perspective). Any other variations?
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06-15-2009, 01:37 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 53
Name: Josh
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Quote:
Originally Posted by yk2
And make it smaller please Josh. I would say by about half.
Personally I am not too comfortable with that tooth, looks a bit intimidating (from a patient's perspective). Any other variations?
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sure thing.
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06-15-2009, 02:26 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Whoa! Valdis, this is not an escort service.  Nice try. No Mr. Brosnan please , can't afford him.
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06-15-2009, 04:09 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Name: Josh
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06-15-2009, 05:40 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Josh,
1. I can hardly see the brush, considering it's already enlarged. Besides, it looks more like a saw or cleaver. 
2. What's with the hook in the G?
3. In the web page the tooth looks huge, the two sharp "fangs" also make it even more intimidating than the previous tooth, even though this one is less realistic. Sorry.
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06-15-2009, 06:35 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Name: Joey
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I just got your message about you wanting me to enter the contest. Here is a last minute entry.
Please note that the Text Color can be changed around.
Enjoy!

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06-15-2009, 06:37 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Name: Valdis Baskirovs
Location: Latvia
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06-15-2009, 08:02 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Name: Josh
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06-15-2009, 08:06 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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So much better Valdis.
Thanks Joey, but I think the walking figure looks more like a road sign than logo. Can u change it? Can't think of any suggestions right now (busy).
Everyone, the deadline for this contest has been extended to Wednesday.
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06-15-2009, 09:42 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Hi Valdis, I like your choice of colour. That pastel green is unique and represents gentleness. I also like the simple but to the point look. One suggestion though, could you in your own way create mobility in your design to represent mobile hygiene service. Thank you for your good work. yvonne.
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06-15-2009, 10:32 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Name: Josh
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06-15-2009, 11:27 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Originally Posted by Baskirovs
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Valdis, the tooth logo is very nice. However, it's too lonely. Since you have already included the text in the logo, I don't know if it would look good if you repeat the name on the side, or maybe a slogan. Just for fun, add in the following slogan and see how the whole thing would look.
GENTLE TO YOUR GUM; GENTLE TO THE PLANET
Or ENVIRONMENT if you need something longer.
Please try with different fonts that are easy to read, avoid the fancy ones.
Thanks.
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06-15-2009, 11:31 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 113
Name: YK
Location: Toronto
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Josh, that's a much better choice of tooth. After looking at different submissions, I am more and more convinced that we should change to the green theme. The original red on the website template spells inflamnation, blood, and PAIN! Please see what you can do to refine the latest version, maybe combine with your first one.
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06-15-2009, 11:36 PM
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Re: $40 contest - Ultra-Gentle Hygiene Care
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Posts: 53
Name: Josh
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my 1st one... are you talking about the tooth on rollerblades?
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