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Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
Old 10-01-2011, 07:44 PM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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I agree that the single column (posts 16/18) looks better than the double column (post #15). I can't see any difference between the three posted images in post #16 & 18. Let me know if I'm missing something.

I really like the look of the bottom area with the image, icons, and tagline. I like the section with the names to take up a smaller portion of the vertical space - perhaps a 2/3 of current space by reducing font sizes and eliminating the boxes. I'd like the top part (above the second horizontal line) to make use of the additional space saved by making the names smaller. I'd like to have "San Jose - O'Connor Hospital" on one line and "Family Medicine Residency Faculty" on the following line. I think the font size of these lines is just right but perhaps more vertical white space. Not sure I like the horizontal lines. I'd prefer the "Proud Sponsors of Spirit of O'Connor 2011" to be more visually interesting - perhaps adding some sort of graphical element rather than the box.
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Old 10-01-2011, 07:56 PM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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Really like the top part but would change the following: 1) Change text after the & to "San Jose - O'Connor Hospital Family Medicine Residency Faculty"; 2) Line break after Hospital. A little more vertical white space above "Family Medicine Associates"; 3) A little more vertical white space before and after the "&" (You'll get the extra vertical space with the reduced size of the font for the bottom part - see below).

Love the middle part. Very visually interesting. I'd like the black part of the STFM logo a little smaller to preserve a bit of a white border around it and the university seal logo a little larger to take up more of the space and have a smaller white border.

For bottom part, post #17 is my favorite - no graphics just textured columns on the sides. Please reduce the font size of the names by 1-2 points without reducing the width of the central column to give it a bit more white space around the names.

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Old 10-02-2011, 12:08 AM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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Old 10-02-2011, 12:12 AM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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I preferred the look of the top part of your first submission.

Would prefer line breaks as follows:
Family Medicine Associates
of San Jose, Inc and the
San Jose - O'Connor Hospital
Family Medicine Residency Faculty

(note I eliminated word Program too)

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Old 10-02-2011, 12:28 AM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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Old 10-02-2011, 10:30 AM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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Thanks to all for the great submissions. It was a close call. Final submissions by gooddesigner, hellobilly, and katesrobyn were all highly worthy.

I've selected post #23 by gooddesigner. Please PM me PayPal details.

Again, thanks to all for your effort & creativity.
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Old 10-02-2011, 03:03 PM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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Old 10-02-2011, 05:51 PM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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Old 10-02-2011, 11:42 PM Re: Simple print ad - $50 - 2 days
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