I have a client that runs a couple of summer camps, a kids Christian camp, and a beach retreat. With the kids camp they are doing a spin off of Indiana Jones. Anyways, below are the two designs and was just going to see if any one had any suggestions, maybe shirt color or changes that could be made. They were both done in AI. Thanks.

try changing the font for "and the search for the last souls", kinda doesn't fit with the indiana jones font

This is what I was after.

the first one looks really good...
i would love to have one of those shirts

Yeah I like that one better myself. I really didn't know what to do for the other one, with what was given me.

i dont know if its the quality of the jpg or if there are two different colors but on the first shirt it looks like the horizontal lines do not match up with the wave (both color and line thickness). And on the indiana jones one I agreee with the font change. Other than that they both look pretty good.

Originally Posted by seocd

i dont know if its the quality of the jpg or if there are two different colors but on the first shirt it looks like the horizontal lines do not match up with the wave (both color and line thickness). And on the indiana jones one I agreee with the font change. Other than that they both look pretty good.

I think that is the jpg, because my ai file does not look that way.

Thanks for the help I will look at some different fonts and see about changing it.

The first one looks cool. That design will be look good on pure white t-shirt or some light color.

I like the first one, it's very nice! As for the other, I don't know, may be the picture doesn't catch an eye

The Indiana Jones feels off balance to me. Like, too heavy on the left compared to the center and right of the design.
For the other design, I think you'd get a lot more oompf out of that sun by adding a very slight gradient (just 10%-15% opacity)... unless of course you're restricting your # of colors because of the printer.