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Old 06-04-2008, 09:22 PM Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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BTW I'm new here so, HI Webmaster-Talk community

So what do you guys think of the banner? Feedback no matter what side you choose is appreciated.

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Old 06-05-2008, 04:50 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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It does look good. Well done.

My problem with it was that I couldn't figure out what it was saying (xsellize). Maybe this is because of context here. I'm sure on your site it will look good.

Overall, I would say you've done well.
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Old 06-06-2008, 10:27 AM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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The logo to the right seems a little messy. You can't distinguish the "s" from the "x". Other than that, I really like it. Nice job!
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Old 06-06-2008, 01:26 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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its a pretty good banner, but i personally don't like it i think you tried to implement too many effects into the banner also the logo doesn't look professional and is hard to read good look with banner anyway i hope my advice has been helpful.
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Old 06-13-2008, 12:18 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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Its busy but good one. Don't you think if should emphasize the ipod more on the design? Nice work
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Old 06-29-2008, 03:57 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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Very nice but the mirror effect is a little over the top. Scale that back and fix the XS on the right side.

I agree with webcosmo. You need to emphasize the iPod touch.
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Old 07-05-2008, 10:31 AM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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nice but the man text it to large and isnt getting the main message across about an ipod touch banner i dont think. But nice design
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Old 07-06-2008, 06:37 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
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Truthfully, I think it's a bit much. I didn't even see the, "Reach out and touch part" until a third look, same with the I-Pods in the background. Ditching the reflection and fireworks effect are highly recommended, as is the dark background.

Yet, on a positive note, the XS logo could be made into a solid branding logo and favicon, that is, if it's cleaned up some, depixelated and made where the X and S are both legible. It should be moved to the left of the full name logo.

I'd take time to consider a catch phrase more in line with your product and less a ripoff of Ma Bell. I'd also make the product more prominent.

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