this is a musical album poster which named as Black Magic ,..the client needs some mistery in the poster as the name denotes..
what I did was this

but client need mystrey again..I don't what mystery he needs (it is still a mystery )
this was the original pic
anyone can provide feed back and "mystery tips"

Overall, very good, particularly the main image. A few points:

The text is almost unreadable. You have a lot of space to play around with, so you could look to make it bigger, bolder or more highly contrasted. The 16 (is it?) is unclear, and it's kinda important.

The woman, I think, should be made so the blacks are blacker (but not the rest), otherwise it looks too much like an unnecessary blot.

The copyright line is misspelled, in an unsuitable font, and needs coherent capitilization.

*****es wait? 'He in coming' is a classic line (i.e. good) but is it saying that *****es should be waiting, or are waiting, or will be? I think if you improve that opening line, then it will come across more mysterious.

thanks flash for the feedback

Hi

I think that "He is Coming" should be lower and possible after the date... it would give it more of a pause and therefore possibly more mystery? That and I think the fonts should be more streamlined...

The main image and effects on the photo look quite fabulous!

I think you should adjust the opacity of the top part of the guy's image. The line is clearly seen.

I do like what you did with the image and the editing. It looks awesome!

It would also work if you adjust "he is coming" and put it a little lower compared to the "*****es wait..."

All in all it is pretty good!

Thanks Eclin and Stefernr

As Eclin said the end line of the hood cap is quite clear
and I merged the image also
Can anyone make a different mystry poster with the given pic and contects?