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Old 07-18-2009, 05:22 PM Feedback on business card
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Here is the image together with all the necessary info!
http://pealo86.deviantart.com/art/Ca...eded-129982306

Thanks to anyone who can help
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Old 07-18-2009, 06:10 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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Hard to read the white text on light blue.
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Old 07-18-2009, 08:35 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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I agree, ^^ - text is slightly difficult to read.

I like the design though, it's very...fresh. Just not too sure about the position from portrait to landscape.
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Old 07-19-2009, 12:29 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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Very nice with a different design, I agree with everyone, the white text is a bit hard to read.
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Old 07-20-2009, 04:05 AM Re: Feedback on business card
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For starters, the text on the right hand side looks upside down relative to the background.

Using your Hue controls why not try changing the grass to a darker shade of green. That would surely fix the white on green readability problem.

The white text on the blue background is a bigger concern.
You should choose a darker color for your text.
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Old 07-20-2009, 04:27 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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best to write "stationery" (as in paper, writing materials, letters) unless you mean 'stopped, not moving' (stationary)
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Old 07-24-2009, 01:34 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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Thanks for the feedback, here's how the end result turned out!
http://pealo86.deviantart.com/art/Fr...Card-130583045
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Old 07-24-2009, 01:37 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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best to write "stationery" (as in paper, writing materials, letters) unless you mean 'stopped, not moving' (stationary)
dang! Too late lol, oh well
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Old 07-24-2009, 01:42 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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apart from the typo they look great. i like the 3 rounded corners!

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Old 07-24-2009, 09:52 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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When I click that link I get 'File Not Found'. Looks like I'm unable to give my feedback
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Old 07-25-2009, 06:20 AM Re: Feedback on business card
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When I click that link I get 'File Not Found'. Looks like I'm unable to give my feedback
You need to click the link in my most recent post
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Old 07-25-2009, 08:16 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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Unique design, it will probably catch a lot of people's attention.
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Old 07-25-2009, 08:25 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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You need to click the link in my most recent post
Oh wow I'm blind, haha thanks for the help. I really like the design you took a unique approach. It will certainly pay off in the end. Great job!
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Old 07-31-2009, 03:43 AM Re: Feedback on business card
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Ya really design looking very nice and attractive. Good work.
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Old 08-03-2009, 08:19 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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Nice work. Good luck!
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Old 08-14-2009, 12:57 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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It almost looks like it's printed on some sort of plastic rather than typical cardstock.

Also, I think you could really benefit from the inclusion of a few ninjas. Probably 4 would be enough. Maybe 5.
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Old 08-15-2009, 12:48 PM Re: Feedback on business card
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Colors are a bit dull, but I like it.
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Old 08-18-2009, 03:42 AM Re: Feedback on business card
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great work, i like how you have photographed it on the grass.
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Old 08-19-2009, 11:54 AM Re: Feedback on business card
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Looks Cool Mostly When You will have it printed i think it will look More better,
text is still hard to read
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