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Name: Sugarcane Gray
Location: Hell, Southern Spain
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Sorry to say but it's not a great design.
Firstly, you've got no margins on there.
Secondly, it's messy, check your alignments.
Thirdly, it probably won't print particularly nice, given the complexity of the gradients.
Fourthly, the colour choice isn't great, it looks dated.
Fifthly, the type is horrible. Different sizes on the same line: no no.
Sixthly, it doesn't really communicate "travel" particularly well, other than the jet image.
Start again. Pick more appropriate colours (research colour meanings). Place a grid on the page before you start work. Choose a better font.
Sorry to be harsh, but it's full of errors.
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