Hi, this was the first proper thing I have ever made in Flash and I’m just wondering if it’s any good? Its a website for my band (dum-fox) Its quite a big file (about .5 mb) so if you haven’t got broadband it may take a while to load and there’s no loading movie yet unfortunately. I’ve tried to include lots of hidden links and things to keep people interested, like the fox being movable for example. Please let me know what you think any suggestions would be appreciated, thanks,
the URL is http://www.dum-fox.com
Mark

i can make u a percentage preloader if u want

Arfan_mahmood_786@hotmail.com

the counter is not that good lookin...

that a fine looking site! I think it would have been easier for you to start and re edit an already created template... I like it

4/10


MrLeone

thanks for your thoughts, i can make the percentace thing thanks, i just havent got round to it yet. I lost my origional counter which looked better ill have to try and find it again. Why 4/10 MrLeone? who are you gonan help if you just give a score and dont actually say anything

Originally Posted by mark_359

Why 4/10 MrLeone? who are you gonan help if you just give a score and dont actually say anything

You ask "What do you think of my website?"

I say 4/10 !!

Plain and simple..

//MrLeone

y 2 post Mrleone???

also i do like ur website the moment of the navs looks but i dont like the contents

5/10

Good start! The nav. fonts are hard to read tho'. From a design perspective, I would probably have changed the gradient colors a bit. All in all, well done for your first shot.

just get a percentage preloader

aleast u keep the user going with interactinity

hey, I think your site is pretty good.. considering that is the first thing you created in flash.. I am trying to learn flash to place on my site.. :-)

use Flashkit.com to learn about flash

hey dude. I think your site was a great start. I have recently learned flash myself and done a couple of sites. I was wondering if you new how to - after I have finnished and exported my site. how do I get it onto the internet? Also how did you get your web adress to animate like it did on the bottom grey bar of screen? cheers Matt..:-)
my email is mpaule@netspace.net.au

email me ill tell u

You have some good ideas with the hidden buttons, keeps you more interested. Id work on some of the colors though to make it easier on the eyes.

the website does not look professional at all if u r tryin to make it for a band go to adidas or nike look ow they have made there website in flash and really good