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Second one's better, but it's about 4/10.
You can draw, the car really looks like a car, it just needs some polishing. But the car outline should be bolder, and that font is really boring. It looks like you're trying to make it look more dynamic with the tilt. If that's the case the text shouldn’t really be inside the outline of the car because that makes the image look 'closed', going against the feeling of speed.
Try this:
Download a font from one of those free font sites and put the text into your photo editing program in vector mode so that you can tweak it.
Maybe if you filled the car outline with black instead of just having an outline it would look better.
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