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Personally I think the first is better. Dont think the angle of the second one really "means" anything - I mean what is the tilt supposed to mean or indicate? speed? the shape fo the car? a hill? something else? I'd be tempted to tilt it more obviously to make it more pronounced.
For the first one I'd cut the car horizontally so only the outline was visbile from the top of the rear bumper/"fender" up. Then I'd make the writing use a heaverier font, and also make it larger so it kinda fills the car's width - this way you can make it smaller and easier to use.
Nice work though.
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