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Old 02-15-2009, 01:21 AM critique on this design
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so im working on a new design for my web gallery
what you guys think of it so far and of the colors

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Old 02-15-2009, 04:06 AM Re: critique on this design
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It looks very nice, might want to change the navigation bar text color to white? Idk.. looks nice!
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Old 02-15-2009, 05:32 PM Re: critique on this design
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I think its nice n clean. good job.
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Old 02-16-2009, 05:57 AM Re: critique on this design
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Looks great! great design
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Old 02-16-2009, 10:50 AM Re: critique on this design
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Yeah.. I agree with you guys. The design is very nice, good combination of color...great work
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Old 02-16-2009, 12:07 PM Re: critique on this design
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The design isn't bad and the colors work well together Raptrex, however, seeing as this is Typography site I would make the "Best Web Typography" a little more exciting, such as a different font, color. The faces on the characters need some improvement, the characters themselves are really cute, nice idea.
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Old 02-17-2009, 09:14 AM Re: critique on this design
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change the color of the "next" and "previous" buttons and also the colors of the main menu. Also what the previous guy said, change the font to something more typographic
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Old 02-17-2009, 04:55 PM Re: critique on this design
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I agree with the others, menu text should be a bit lighter font. You probably wanted to make it more subtle. You don't have to make it absolute white though.

Maybe a gradient or two would make the design more cozy?

And yea, need to put some fancy typographic design into the main title for sure!

good job!
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Old 02-17-2009, 09:18 PM Re: critique on this design
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Lighter fonts is really needed for dark colored templates. But all in all, it is pretty good.

BTW, if this site will be optimized in the future, consider putting up a small amount of content on top of those thumbnails. Maybe a description or a little background about what the site is will do.
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Old 02-19-2009, 01:17 AM Re: critique on this design
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you centered everything on the page except for the nav, id center it..
add a gradient or 2.
the logo could defiantly use work
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Old 02-19-2009, 11:44 PM Re: critique on this design
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it looks good and simple.....
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Old 02-21-2009, 03:10 PM Re: critique on this design
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k heres an update on the design


well i changed a few things like added gold, redid the nav bar and previous/next links

also using lucida grande as the main font now, shows up a bit blury, crappy screenshot sorry
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Old 02-23-2009, 12:12 PM Re: critique on this design
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simple and clean not a bad design
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Old 02-24-2009, 01:52 AM Re: critique on this design
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The color combination is nice but the whole thing is too dark for me. How about adding one more color, something bright and warm but of course it has to match the blues that you're using. Use the new color for the navigation bars so they'll stand out.
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Old 02-24-2009, 03:23 AM Re: critique on this design
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Your Design is nice
It's very clean and neat
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Old 02-25-2009, 07:09 PM Re: critique on this design
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I like the design but I think the original font stood out more.
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Old 02-27-2009, 01:53 PM Re: critique on this design
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Looks good. Nice and Clean. I'd lighten it a bit though. But thats just me
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Old 03-02-2009, 07:48 AM Re: critique on this design
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Nice and clean,just change color of the header space to make the page more alive.
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Old 03-03-2009, 12:06 AM Re: critique on this design
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i think the background is a bit dark
you should try something more brighter and maybe a bit more fun color..
like...red maybe...not for overall background,but just a bit..to make your page more interesting..anyway,its a good page and i like it...
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Old 03-03-2009, 05:01 AM Re: critique on this design
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On the updated version, the navigation text color is still not light enough. Try a simple white
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