Music Makers of Nepali

The talents of many Nepali artists and bands have been unknown and hidden from the rest of the world. It's been the best kept secret...until now. Although they remain unknown to many, they are continually gaining the attention and earning respect from those that have had the pleasure of listening to them perform. We have set up this website to pay tribute to the many talented and gifted Nepali bands and artists and the songs that they created. Look out world, here they come!

If you're part of a Nepali band or an artist and has a Nepali song that you would like to see on this website, please send an email to bernardmax@rediffmail.com. You are also invited to share your opinions and ideas on our forum.

Firstly, on your site get rid of the justified text and make it left aligned.

Now, for your introduction, how does this sound?
"Our many Nepali bands and artists are still hidden on this Earth, and their songs are infamous. No matter how good they or their songs are, their talent is never respected the way it should. That is why, we have set up this website; to pay tribute to those talented individuals and make the whole world see just who they are."

It was generally your use of grammar and wording that let it down. Put the last lines of your introduction into a services page or contact page.

Thanx for editing.
i like your short description and i have updated my website. One more thing, can you edit the second or last paragraph of this? I want my visitors to discuss on infamous bands and artists in my forum. And if the visitor itself is an infamous artist, i want him to submit his or her profile as well as songs. Which site name sounds good for this website. Currently it is nepali mp3 downloads.

pliz edit below.


If you really have one please Email me at bernardmax@rediffmail.com to make your orinal track famous. And also you can share your opinions and ideas in our forum.

I would suggest that instead of the word "infamous", you use something like "unknown". I understand that by using the word "infamous" you are trying to say that their songs are "not famous". But the word "infamous" in the english language actually means "well known but not liked".

Hi BernardMax,
Interesting website...but please do NOT use the word infamous in your website. The word "infamous" means "having an exceedingly bad reputation". Don't believe me? Check it out here!

I've taken the liberty of rewriting your paragraph. Perhaps you might like this.

I would suggest you change the title. Anyway, here's what I wrote. You can use it if you'd like.

Music Makers of Nepali

The talents of many Nepali artists and bands have been unknown and hidden from the rest of the world. It's been the best kept secret...until now. Although they remain unknown to many, they are continually gaining the attention and earning respect from those that have had the pleasure of listening to them perform. We have set up this website to pay tribute to the many talented and gifted Nepali bands and artists and the songs that they created. Look out world, here they come!

If you're part of a Nepali band or an artist and has a Nepali song that you would like to see on this website, please send an email to bernardmax@rediffmail.com. You are also invited to share your opinions and ideas on our forum.

By the way, don't forget to take away the word "infamous" on your other pages as well. Substitute another word, like previously suggested...."unknown" or "undiscovered" would work.


Just my 2 cents,
DianeD

Million of thanx to all of u specially DianeO. I was randomly making my website and showing the world. But u guys have opened my eyes. This forum is really helpful.

thanx again...