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Name: Adam for web page design, not program
Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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I don't know about rewording that part, Jamie. As offensive as it may be to some, it might actually work in your favour.
Think about it...if you piss someone off, what's the first thing they do? They go complaining about it to anyone that will listen. You might even polarize some opinions, and that usually works out well for the person who created the polarization (is that a word?)
The only thing that I noticed is that there are a few places at the end of paragraphs where you're missing periods (paragraph 2 on the home page, for example.) Go through your copy and look for that.
Other than that, I think you just need to bring out your content more (which is what you're going to do), put the logo on the top, and come up with a bit more attractive design (it doesn't have to go overboard, but you'll come up with something.)
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