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Old 09-19-2007, 03:17 AM Please visit ana make a comment.
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..Hello guys..we are building our sites, it is an internet marketing website,, please give us your comments and your suggestions how we can make this site functional and effective.

http://abilitymarketing.com.au
http://brisbanetechnologies.com

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Old 09-19-2007, 04:42 AM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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First website needs some attention. All your CSS should be external and linked - a lot of inline styling as well which could be done with classes. Much better to use all CSS for your menus - drop the JS.

I'd also drop the Flash logo and just have a JPG - dont think it adds anything and try to get rid of the Table as a container and use just Divs if possible.

Second website is a lot cleaner.
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Old 09-19-2007, 05:27 AM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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both sites look great really professional
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Old 09-20-2007, 04:55 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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In the first website, change title for each page.
Looks very nice.
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Old 09-20-2007, 04:58 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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Old 09-21-2007, 06:59 AM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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Old 09-21-2007, 07:27 AM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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both site have professional look.
2nd site is the best.
I don't like the header area of the 1st site which looks like flooring website.
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Old 09-21-2007, 03:57 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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I like both sites, although I agree the 2nd one is better looking.

Keep an eye on you're loading times I'm on broadband and both sites were slow loading. I was looking at a white screen for about 3 seconds.
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Old 09-21-2007, 08:38 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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LOOKS professional on the surface, but the code.. not so much. Yet another mess of nested tables and a lot of ugly inline styles.

There isn't a thing in #1 that can't be accomplished WITHOUT tables for layout.

On the 1st site, even on my broadband connection the background was slow loading -just one of the symptoms of using tables for layout.

#2 is much better - no tables for layout, but there are a few things that need some tweaking.

Your text needs to be inside <p></p> tags as that is the proper way to do it. You shouldn't forego proper document structures just because your material isn't on paper.

Once you put your text inside proper paragraphs, you can style the <p> to adjust spacing and do away with all the unnecessary <br /> tags.

The links at the bottom really should be in an unordered list.

The target attribute is deprecated and really shouldn't be used in XHTML (or at all). Make a proper link to the page.
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Old 09-22-2007, 05:06 AM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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both sites give a very professional look.. good job..
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Old 09-22-2007, 08:01 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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Old 09-22-2007, 11:18 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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First website needs some attention. All your CSS should be external and linked - a lot of inline styling as well which could be done with classes. Much better to use all CSS for your menus - drop the JS.

I'd also drop the Flash logo and just have a JPG - dont think it adds anything and try to get rid of the Table as a container and use just Divs if possible.

Second website is a lot cleaner.
I agree with everyone he said. The Flash you're using is absolutely useless. Get rid of it if possible. I'm not sure I understand the "wooden" background since this is a marketing website, not a carpenter's website.

I like the color scheme though. And I think its pretty user friendly as well. Nice job.
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Old 09-23-2007, 03:25 PM Re: Please visit ana make a comment.
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I like your site, I like it a lot in my opinion you have done a really good job with your website.
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