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Old 10-09-2007, 12:51 AM Planet of Internet
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I would like to announce our new website Planet of Internet.

Please review and check this out...

http://www.planetofinternet.com
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Old 10-09-2007, 01:50 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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1. logo looks amatuerish.

2. Blue box on the bottom doesnt match.

3. Is your content body a table?

4. Your neighborhood is completely image based, thats suicide for a dial up user (yes they exist....somewhere)

5. I dont exactly understand the concept, you buy a house, and live?

6. peacetown? That doesnt match your sites message or theme.

7. Every page has a different color scheme, establish some continuity.

8. Your title should be your site name and description or catch phrase, not a question.

9. Content on the main boxy could be better organized.

Overall it needs alot of work, and maybe an actual design. The concept is original, but it needs to be clarified.

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Old 10-09-2007, 04:23 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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Logo is bad, design is bad, and I didn't understand what the site was about when I first went on the site, and still actually don't.

Needs alot of work.

Edit: in your name you have sohbet and i've seen alot of spam with sohbet stuff on my toplists
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Old 10-09-2007, 09:16 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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the logo looks like a nuclear power plant logo... The lack of colors makes the site look not really pro...
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Old 10-09-2007, 10:10 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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Thank you all comments over logo, but why don't you register and try to use planet of internet.

"Edit: in your name you have sohbet and i've seen alot of spam with sohbet stuff on my toplists" <- WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT? WHICH SPAM?
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Old 10-09-2007, 11:27 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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It's just bizarre.

I just don't think the concept works. Why on earth would you want to have to scroll around a masssssive graphic to find something from a tiny selection of what's on the website.

Will check back in 12 months, my bet would be - the site is gone or has different content completely.
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Old 10-09-2007, 11:34 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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"Edit: in your name you have sohbet and i've seen alot of spam with sohbet stuff on my toplists" <- WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT? WHICH SPAM?
I use Aardvark Topsites on some of my sites and they suffer terribly from sohbet spammers, just the name Sohbet and the language your site is the same as the spammers.... Perhaps you have nothing to do with that but the name just generally makes me think "spam"

Edit: sohbet means chat in turkish doesn't it? hmm

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Will check back in 12 months, my bet would be - the site is gone or has different content completely.
Ditto
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Old 10-09-2007, 12:10 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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Thanks for your all comments...
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Old 10-09-2007, 12:22 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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Is this like SIMS? Building your own land and interacting with an on-line community? I know the concept works as a game but seems kind of lame as a business purpose. Good luck with that.
You need a better layout, an original looking logo, and a better colour scheme.
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Old 10-09-2007, 12:28 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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Very basic design with amateurish color concept...I think designed in hurryness.....anyways.....keep it up !!
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Old 10-09-2007, 07:43 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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It does look pretty amateur. A little more style on the page would be nice. A new header would also help with it. I think you might just want to restart with the design.
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Old 10-11-2007, 08:32 AM Re: Planet of Internet
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looks like a gaming website
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Old 10-11-2007, 02:54 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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Your Logo is used for nuclear projects or company ...normal webiste with Gud PR-4
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Old 10-11-2007, 05:56 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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4/10 its looks like a amturesite
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Old 10-11-2007, 09:34 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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Looks like an outdated design. A bit standard and in need of instant refurbishment... a bit like a tramp begging for change.

PM if you like... I'm a web designer. I may be able to do a deal with you.
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Old 10-12-2007, 04:47 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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Looks ok. Besides the image link put some text links above cos most ppl are used to text links. Also use css borders.otherwise its neat
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Old 10-12-2007, 06:05 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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i like the idea- i think it will work on a level of newbies to the internet- but:

homepage needs lots of work to make someone want to look at your main viewing page-

you need to put all of your searchable/viewable stores/businesses etc into one scrollable box, not have someone using their browse arrows. i'm on a 21" monitor and had to scroll for 9 hours to go across.. poor saps on a 15" laptop screen wouldn't give you the 6 seconds i did-

ur graphics look in between retro (atari) and lego... make that a strongpoint and market directly to the new gamer generation of 8yo to 13yo...

random: i was lost- didn't get a msg as to what the site was or did- i got more from ur post in here than i did out of viewing the site-

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Old 10-12-2007, 07:07 PM Re: Planet of Internet
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On first look home page does not look as bad, Logo needs some improvisation. May be enclosing text in that object.

The banner image at the start is not looking suitable for that place, you should adjust it on some other place.

Otherwise design looks smooth and neat.
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