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Old 11-07-2007, 12:42 AM Review my website please
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Hello all, I was hoping to get a review for my first website: http://www.easyonlinemoneymaking.com

Thanks in advance =)
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Old 11-07-2007, 01:30 AM Re: Review my website please
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I would upgrade and get rid of the free ads on the top. Other than that, I like it.

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Old 11-07-2007, 08:13 AM Re: Review my website please
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Hi , these are my personal opinion

The ads placed at the top is not so impressive , it looks out of template ,
try to add with the content

Try changing the font size and all your font is bold , try changing it , unless u need to specify something or headline dont make bold

and try to get everthing within a frame - i mean to say the template ,

since your site is related tomoney making , i would suggect u to add some payment proof , by which people will be impressed and would get more refferal
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Old 11-07-2007, 08:58 AM Re: Review my website please
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Hi , these are my personal opinion

The ads placed at the top is not so impressive , it looks out of template ,
try to add with the content

Try changing the font size and all your font is bold , try changing it , unless u need to specify something or headline dont make bold

and try to get everthing within a frame - i mean to say the template ,

since your site is related tomoney making , i would suggect u to add some payment proof , by which people will be impressed and would get more refferal
Fully agree! for the rest it looks pretty nice
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Old 11-07-2007, 09:50 AM Re: Review my website please
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It looks great! however, if you want my personal opinion, center the website instead of right justify, and possible put the google ad at the bottom. And remove all that excess space from each section at the bottom.

Other than those minor details, I think your website serves its purpose nicely!
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Old 11-07-2007, 08:22 PM Re: Review my website please
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Thanks all =) Noticed quite a few typos in one of my sub-pages today, hopefully I nabbed them all.
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Old 11-07-2007, 09:16 PM Re: Review my website please
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I wouldn't buy from site like yours an Ice in the Desert.

1. The page is Out off frame
2. Your font size (for morons only to enjoy) must be cut in a half
3. Remove empty space from half page down to the bottom
4. Move "get FireFox" budge undes left menu
5. Move Adsense to the bottom

After you done with change report your progress and ask us again to
review your site. Hopefully you didn't paid to much to your "webmaster"
for the garbage he created


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Old 11-07-2007, 10:58 PM Re: Review my website please
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Wow. What can I say. What was this made with? Source code looks really bad.

Font is unreadable in the menu and bold is only for emphasis. Hint - nearly the whole content area is not emphasis.

Header should stand out more. Get a logo.

Plus what fastreplies said.
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Old 11-08-2007, 03:05 AM Re: Review my website please
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I don't like too many ads on the website.
How do you earn money from it?
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Old 11-08-2007, 03:31 AM Re: Review my website please
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Hi, I would add some more tips that can hopefully improve your site, first, the beginning of "Welcome to Easy..." phrase merges on the white background, second the link to your blog should be made more noticeable.
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Old 11-08-2007, 03:00 PM Re: Review my website please
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It still looks somewhat empty, make it little by shorter...

And maybe the Ads from the top banner should be on the some skyscraper on the left. But afterall it´s quite a nice web
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Old 11-09-2007, 02:36 AM Re: Review my website please
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Frankly I can't figure out how to get a skyscraper into that area, this is my first site and I just used a pre-made template for that part. Fast replies, I didn't pay anyone to do my site, I'm an 18 year old with some free time and decided to make a website but thanks for your criticisms. I'll change the fonts over the weekend and try to figure out how to shorten the empty space at the bottom of my site, I tried yesterday and it was just changing the area where the text was, not the whole bottom portion. I'm aware that the source code looks fugly as hell, I assumed it would be since I used SiteBuilder for this version of my website (which is why I'm having trouble finding where to put in the HTML for my skyscraper). Thanks all that have reviewed so far, it's nice to have people truly point out faults rather than the people I've asked in real life that just tell me it looks good
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Old 11-09-2007, 08:10 AM Re: Review my website please
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Have you tryed your site at IE7? Height of table is too long.
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Old 11-09-2007, 10:59 AM Re: Review my website please
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I'm strictly Layout... so I apologize in advance that I can't help with the coding.

The font used in the text is too large and bold. It you want it to stand out, sepetate it into sections and bold the first sentence in each section. Use tables or frames with borders to make it easy for the eye to scan. The frame at the bottom is much larger than it needs to be. That is easy to fix. I would extend the top and side design across the page. You don't need to fill it in with clutter... just extend it somehow. Use bold lettering in the left menu to make it easier to see. I think the color scheme is really eye pleasing. Good Work!
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Old 11-09-2007, 01:41 PM Re: Review my website please
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1. Remove top ads

2. Pink and green? Ugh

3. Im on a 1600x1200 resolution, and your page extends at least 8 pages down with nothing on it

4. Format your text better, for example:

Quote:
The purpose of this website is to show you how to utilize your computer, Internet connection
and unique skills and attributes to make money online.
should be...

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The purpose of this website is to show you how to utilize your computer, Internet connection and unique skills and attributes to make money online.
5. Use some titles or attention grabbing in the bulk of your essay on the home page, I wouldnt bother reading it.

otherwise looks alright, I dont understand why sites like this exist, theres at least another million a google search away. Anyway, good luck.
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Old 11-09-2007, 10:25 PM Re: Review my website please
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I don't care for the large font sizes and the colour scheme. That aside, not bad!
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Old 11-10-2007, 01:45 AM Re: Review my website please
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hmmm url sounds like a scam sorry but nice content
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Old 11-10-2007, 07:26 AM Re: Review my website please
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pick one color, pink OR green
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Old 11-12-2007, 07:24 AM Re: Review my website please
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opinion from newbie :
- need more improvement in layout and design
- add search options
- group the product by category
thanks
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Old 11-12-2007, 11:11 AM Re: Review my website please
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Sorry, but your website needs a nice re-design with a clear layout and structure
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