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Old 11-24-2007, 11:03 PM Your comments please!
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Hi Folks,

I would love to get your feedback. Please don’t hold back. Any suggestions, critiques are appreciated. Please dont hold back. I can take it!

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Old 11-24-2007, 11:29 PM Re: Your comments please!
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Good family site. Basic clean easy on the eye. I like the colors.

I like sites that are central in the screen.

its fine.

btw stop putting yourself down in your other post's. Your contributions are valued so please don't devalue them yourself
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Old 11-25-2007, 03:18 AM Re: Your comments please!
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What happened to your pics? Where are they?

Without any doubts if you add some images to all your text, then your site
become alive and will look much more happier.


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Old 11-25-2007, 08:03 AM Re: Your comments please!
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I think your site need some graphical touch
header with relevant picture

some icons or other effect in the navigation

add pictures in the receipes pages
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Old 11-25-2007, 08:58 AM Re: Your comments please!
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Nice site. Its very simple and clean, yes you need to add some graphics/images
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Old 11-25-2007, 11:56 AM Re: Your comments please!
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It seems you are still in the making of it ...

the first page looks empty you should consider putting some nice content (with pictures) in the front page, and don't forget pictures in the photography section
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Old 11-25-2007, 12:18 PM Re: Your comments please!
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fill it man , put some content , this will effect your ads also in case if you go for some adsense program

i would have placed page container in between...

put some bright colors choice

and plz plz

dont mind its my suggestion may be what u like i dont like and what i like you dont like lol so dont mind
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Old 11-26-2007, 11:06 PM Re: Your comments please!
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NIce blog... Please put some contents on your site. That would help you to improve your traffic...
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Old 11-27-2007, 02:00 AM Re: Your comments please!
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Pictures and contents are really one of the important on-page factors for a site...

Nice work anyway... Very clean. I like the color too...
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Old 11-27-2007, 06:09 AM Re: Your comments please!
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Looks good. Like the uncluttered design. The colours look good on my screen.

Only thing I would suggest is that that the menu bar areas on the side change colour on roll-over (rather than having to rollover the text itself). That means that people with fat fingers (like me) can easily click on your menu items.

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Old 11-27-2007, 11:55 AM Re: Your comments please!
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-ad a picture of the family on the front page. (maybe where you currently have the welcome image)
-Make the header image clickable (take you to home page) a lot of users expect your header image to link to your home page.


keep up the good work.
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Old 11-27-2007, 12:44 PM Re: Your comments please!
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Not bad. Colors are a tad bland.
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Old 11-28-2007, 08:24 PM Re: Your comments please!
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Thanks for your responses. I took your advice and centered the site, fixed the busted Wii link, (which is legit btw) added and footer and completed the <title> tag.

I have a site map, highlighting active link, dumping the frames and going to external CSS, solving validating problems, and making the main logo a link, all on the TODO list. I added some Graphics and photos, see recipes > Butternut Squash and Wild Rice Soup for a sample of my plans for all the articles

BTW what specify is wrong with using tables? I hear use CSS instead but I guess I’m not sure how to use CSS as an alternative to the tables I used to keep things in place. I’d love to hear more about this.
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If you have time please take a look at the changes so far and let me know what you think!

Thanks again for the excellent feedback.
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Old 11-28-2007, 08:25 PM Re: Your comments please!
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Also I should have posted this before but...

Hi Folks,

This is my first “real” site, well the framework for it anyway, very little of the content has been added at this time. I have stacks of stuff my family has asked me to add and don’t want to start adding stuff until I get the framework down pat. The Google ads are a little tacky but we are hoping the will generate enough cash to pay for the hosting of the site. As you can tell its basically a family website and place for my dad to share ideas and write some articles to share with the world.

I would love to get your feedback. Please don’t hold back, I can take it. Any suggestions, critiques are appreciated.

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Old 11-28-2007, 11:20 PM Re: Your comments please!
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Looks good. I would make the logo a link back to the main page.
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Old 11-29-2007, 07:58 PM Re: Your comments please!
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I agree with others that this is a nice clean and simple site but also agree that it needs more content. My marketing classes have taught me that when it comes to selling items, less is usually more. You have a limited amount of time to lead viewers to your products and convince them to buy. This is much harder to do if their attentions aren't focused on your products. While stunningly visual sites are impressive, they can often cost a company business by diverting attention away from the product at hand.

But, since your aren't selling anything, you don't have to worry about this. Your goal should be to provide the informational content you want in such away that views' attention is captured by this content. So I would keep the simple design and color layout you have while using a font size and color that is complementary to your background and your images. Remember, you want people to pay attention to "what" you are saying more than to "how" you are saying it.
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Old 11-29-2007, 08:42 PM Re: Your comments please!
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As others have said before, pretty clean site you got yourself. You may want too screw around with the coloring a little bit. The colors you have now make it seem very old in my opinion. Also, you need to get some more content. When people go to your site, I am sure most are looking for 100's, maybe even 1000's of recipes. You should get some from any cookbook's you own, or some of your friends, just using different wording for your recipes. Otherwise, I think you have some potential. I like that it is a family site and it has a good template, except for the colors as I mentioned above. And I wish you luck with it. By the way, I must admit, those pickeled peppers were amazing
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Old 12-01-2007, 09:05 AM Re: Your comments please!
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at first glance it's missing a nice family logo..

as i navigated down the site started to get bigger and bigger and bigger, think you should try to keep the site in a same size whatever page you are on.

Add a logo index.html link to all pages.

well done thus far
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