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New to web building, please rate my effort !
12-05-2007, 05:04 PM
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New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 49
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Hi all,
After taking a look at some of your exelent web building, I decided to take the plunge and offer my effort for assesment.
Please be delicate with me as this is my very 1st effort and as yet dont know how to code or do all the script stuff, but I will.
My site is based on 80's music and is flash heavy.
www.music-reunited.co.uk
would also love a good pointer to get it into the top search engines.
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12-10-2007, 11:54 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 4
Name: Kevin
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Hi,
First of all, let me appreciate your efforts.
I've a few suggestions.
Overall It looks nice, it would be better if you modify your css to look attractive.
The flash header also looks nice
Thanks
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12-11-2007, 05:38 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 11
Location: Croydon UK
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Good first effort. maybe a change of font to a non-serif font. maybe justify the text. maybe too many colours
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12-11-2007, 06:59 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 169
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very good effort.
Stop the forum text link blinking at the bottom of the page, you will thank me for it in the future and send me christmas cards, believe me.
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12-12-2007, 12:16 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 3,987
Name: Abel Mohler
Location: Asheville, North Carolina USA
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I am really not a fan of flash menus, black backgrounds, or purple text, but you have somehow managed to make all of them look good together.
If you want to get better at web design, I would learn as much as possible about CSS as you can. You have good taste and would make an excellent designer (trust me, if you can make those three things I mentioned work together visually, you can do anything).
Learn to hand code as much as possible. There is a big problem when relying on flash to navigate: If the end-user doesn't have flash installed, he won't get anywhere! There are all sorts of things you can do with google's site maps, but I would rather not go there. If you learn to code you can present a pure html/css alternative to flash that will work even with it disabled.
Keep learning, you are off to a great start.
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12-12-2007, 06:16 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 178
Name: Josh
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Quote:
Originally Posted by beta
Stop the forum text link blinking at the bottom of the page, you will thank me for it in the future and send me christmas cards, believe me.
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He knows what hes talking about. Seriously, it drove me crazy after about 3 blinks.
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Originally Posted by nickreynolds
maybe too many colours
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agreed, especially in the list down the side, and too be honest, i think you could do with sticking to just one colour in the main section (for the tracklists etc...)
but generally i like it, youve done well, love the ipods btw, did you make them yourself?
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12-12-2007, 09:54 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 31
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nice effort... nice flash header, and the ipods are cool! 1 thing i noticed is that, there are too many colors.. try limit your color in 2-3 colors.... i guess you've used that colors in order for you to organize your categories.. try to come up with another idea on how to organized your categories...
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12-13-2007, 02:50 AM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 248
Name: Neeraj Srivastava
Location: India
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As it is your first effort, you have really done well. just little more work on your CSS to make it more attractive.
Also because Search engines do not like Flash sites so this article may help you to optimised it well. here is the article-
http://www.webconfs.com/optimizing-f...article-14.php
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12-13-2007, 06:38 AM
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Posts: 24
Name: Damon
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good, but very contrast colors
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12-14-2007, 05:36 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Name: Willy
Location: Georgia
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Looks Great for your first effort. Looks better than my first site for sure ; )
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12-21-2007, 09:21 AM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 49
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Hi again,
Thanx for all your comments I have taken tham on board.
The flashing link to the forum was a mistake at first but I thought it would highlight it better...guess not lol
The colour scheme for the text was supposed to correspond with the catagories as somone mentioned...& to make it feel retro & club like as i think I achieved with my banner...again will take note
The font I quite liked...!
Adjusting the CSS MMmmm (gonna have to read up on that a bit)
I am making a few modifications as sugested at the moment and will implement them soon. thanx for all you suggestions keep em coming..
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12-21-2007, 04:20 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Name: Wayne
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The flashing does highlight it better, I think more people will goto the forum just to get it to stop blinking :-) Did you create the flash yourself? Nice work.
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12-21-2007, 05:07 PM
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Posts: 16
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Very nice. Amazing quality music. Nice choice of colours, effects, and shading. And I love 80's music too.
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12-22-2007, 10:06 AM
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Name: Philip Leighton
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Good initial design. I agree with some of the gys that you need to look at your CSS to make the fonts better to read and in keeping with the site.
I do like the Ipod and the tune on them. Bring back the 80's???
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12-22-2007, 04:41 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 410
Name: Harry Burt
Location: Colchester, Essex, England
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Very good! A few problems:
- You are missing a few apostrophes (it's, can't e.t.c.)
- I think that the website name should be shown all the time
- The forum banner should be in the style of the main banner
- A few too many colloquialism for my liking, often on top of each other
- When viewed in a low resolution, the right side is cut off. It happens at quite a small decrease.
- Get a better font
- The direct HTML addresses are impossible to use, because of the spaces, and subsequent %20s in the page address.
That's all!
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12-22-2007, 07:39 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 49
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thank you very much for all your comments so far.
I had to look up the word colloquialism....LOL
The missing apostrophes are due to a lack of
concentration & will be rectified.
I noticed the %20 problem after I uploaded it to the web
and only then realised what it was...lots to change !
I will take a look at the banner, I agree it should state the
web site name at all times.
I still can't see the problem with the font, maybe because
this is all still new to me, can somone please elaborate on this
with a possible example so I can compare.
Thank you for all your input
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12-24-2007, 04:11 AM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 13
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i definitely get the mood for it. The black theme + ipod + colors on the banner already tell me what the site is about, great
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12-24-2007, 04:42 AM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 19
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Well effort, very good lay-out and contrast for back ground, try to change font colors and style for more visibility.........
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01-13-2008, 07:31 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 49
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After all your great comments, I have taken some of the points raised,
and over the last week have made a few adjustments.
If you made any comment b4 please reply to the now ammended look
of my site.
thanx again
www.music-reunited.co.uk
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01-14-2008, 02:53 PM
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Re: New to web building, please rate my effort !
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Posts: 18
Name: Simon Ward
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Is this really your first effort? If it is, you are going to go very far! I like it a lot, even better if it was for 70s rock music!
Well done!
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