Heya,
Please bear in mind that I'm writing this as I go through your site.
I hate splash/intro/"enter" pages. I see them as completely unessesary wastes of my time. But I actually like yours. I didn't mind it and found it quite interesting. Mainly because It's artistic. However, as OSmaster pointed out, I also think it needs to be reworked...
I can see why you put that page in, but then I think you killed it a bit with all the stuff underneath. I think you should literally have your random arty image, and the "Enter Website" (also I'd add a copyright  ). Then you need to consider repositioning stuff. Here's what I'd do (doesn't mean it's the right thing to do of course  ): - Put margins on the page (topmargin="10" etc in the body tag).
- Perhaps move your two bits of content to the centre of the page... and see how it looks (might be better where it is... but it's always something to try).
- You know the orange that you get when you rollover "Enter Website"? Take that orange... now put a 1px border around your image, and make it that colour. I'm guessing that would look quite good but I am only guessing! Try a white as well... maybe you could have it change on rollover?
I love the main site. Think if you sort our your introduction then you'll be good. I haven't got much time to pick holes in the main site but it generally looks pretty good quality... may return and have a better look later.
Anyway... I'll go away as this is too long as it is. Your design and photography looks really good and I hope your site goes well!
Edit: Just to clarify I do think you should keep the intro page as it adds an artistic touch... but it definately needs rethinking in terms of content.
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Last edited by itscooper; 12-07-2007 at 05:34 PM..
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