Hi GraphicBand
First off, great site - it certainly looks promising. That being said you do have to set yourself as a competitor to some of the other ecard websites like American Greeting, Yahoo eCards and Blue Mountain- you have the infrastructure, so I guess now it's time to concentrate on design?
1) I agree, the tagline needs a bit of polishing. Something like
Greet someone special - once more.
More ways to greet someone special.
would work. Besides, it's
someone as
one word
. It's
Birthday rather than
BirthDay.
2) You'll be needing a few more categories than three. But I guess you already knew that.
3) Load time: -1.4127 seconds? *skeptic*
4) You need to brush up on the design in general. For example, the text is too close to the edge of the border. I think there needs to be a bit more professionalism in the whole design.
5) Rewrite it as:
Welcome to the Greet More.
Greet More has worked hard to bring you well
-animated flash ecards. No registration is required to send e-cards from certain categories.
However please register
(remove: GreetMore) as it only takes a few moments.
6) I would make the images and the text in bold under the E-Card Categories part of the main page clickable and linkable, instead of the one link below. I had to click a few times just to find the right link.
I think you have the workings of a nice site (Remove or conceal the fact that you're running Maian Greetings because it seems considerably less professional). Good luck with it and all the best!
