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Old 01-02-2008, 09:08 AM First website
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I ve my first website and choose to do it with css and Id like to know what people think about it.

all comments are welcome
http://irelandrcdrift.sitesled.com


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Old 01-02-2008, 09:50 PM Re: First website
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Not bad, if that's your first design I expect you will be quite good at this after a few more!

The site is laid out nicely, easy to navigate, the colors are easy on the eyes. All in all I would give it a 5/10.

Good job!
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Old 01-02-2008, 09:55 PM Re: First website
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Not bad for a first 'go' at css. Atleast you're proactive and take the time to write css than people who slice up photoshop images. TWO THUMBS UP
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Old 01-03-2008, 01:34 AM Re: First website
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Couple of boo-boos in your HTML.
One little itty bitty error in your CSS...

Your page is off center horizontally (at least in Mac FireFox) because of this:

Code:
.page {
    margin : 10% 20% 0 20%;
    padding : 0;
    width : 720px;
    height : 610px;
}
If you just center the div it'll be perfect.
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Old 01-03-2008, 02:52 AM Re: First website
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Very good effort for a first timer, but still choice of color is not good especially the background gradient and the pattern behind the main content body imo.
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Old 01-03-2008, 06:22 AM Re: First website
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Thanks for comments

I suppose it is not a complicated website so there are few places where I can screw up.
I do not have any good knowledge in Photoshop so I tried to make it visualy attractive as much as I can.
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Old 01-03-2008, 06:33 AM Re: First website
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Oh er another problem I wanted solve is when validated the site it asked me to put doctype in it, so I did that, then I got lots of errors coz I didnt use XHTML which I dont know any.
Should I still leave as it is or take out doctype and I will get only 2 or 3 errors instead 33.
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Old 01-03-2008, 06:59 AM Re: First website
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Not bad smokymo..
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Old 01-03-2008, 11:06 AM Re: First website
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Oh er another problem I wanted solve is when validated the site it asked me to put doctype in it, so I did that, then I got lots of errors coz I didnt use XHTML which I dont know any.
Should I still leave as it is or take out doctype and I will get only 2 or 3 errors instead 33.
Leave the doctype as it is and try to remove the errors by correcting your code.
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Old 01-05-2008, 02:47 PM Re: First website
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Nice And Easy Look To It. Easy Site Navigation Is Good. Note Sure The Banner Goes With It Because Of The irish Colours In The Text.
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Old 01-05-2008, 03:58 PM Re: First website
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For a first site I will say great job. However; a few suggestions, first, I am not crazy about the colors, I would (IMO) would change the green in your header the www part to a softer green maybe like this.

Then I would use that green and the orange that you have already more throughout the page, maybe some of your columns or something. I will say blue is my favorite color but to much of any one color is not appealing. Hope this helps.
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Old 01-06-2008, 04:35 PM Re: First website
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Old 01-06-2008, 09:03 PM Re: First website
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Very nice site:

I like....

1. The structure of it
2. The logo looks professional
3. The text is nice and easy to see

I dislike...

1. The blue hurts my eyes a bit but then again my eyes are not too good
2. It is more to the right than centered
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