Website Review and Suggestions

**deyu** · 01-16-2008, 04:24 PM

hello ... me again ...

ived changed my sites layout .. and fill it with " professional text " .. if you guyz find any mistakes tell me pls ...

ived tested the layout in : Mozilla , IE , Opera ..

its seams okay ..

what you think about it ?

see it : www.sitesmakers.com

**w3kit** · 01-16-2008, 05:23 PM

I'm gonna make a few suggestions, apologize if I come across as being blunt.

1. Hire a content writer, there are simply too many mistakes for me to list.

2. Keep the font size and color consistent throughout the site.

3. The Contact page falls over if I ignore all the text boxes and click on the send mail button.

4. I do not like the domain name, its incorrect and puts you on the back foot right from the start.

**deyu** · 01-16-2008, 06:11 PM

what you mean by domain name is wrong ?

**TripleMoons** · 01-17-2008, 05:00 AM

"Sites Makers" is incorrect English...
"Site Maker," "Site Makers" or "Sites Maker" would be correct...
(basically you have one too many S's)

I don't understand the blimps or the sign thing in the background.

Instead of trying to force the navigation into the clouds, why not make a navigation bar at the top and move your content area up? You're waisting a lot of space. I would also increase the opacity on the content area, choose ONE font family set and font color as it's difficult to read as it is now...

Invalid HTML. Invalid CSS.

**floweringmind** · 01-18-2008, 05:51 PM

WOW that is really ugly.

**TripleMoons** · 01-18-2008, 06:03 PM

WOW that was a helpful post.