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Old 02-24-2008, 09:32 AM Review Travel Site
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Kindly review my site Travlingfool
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Old 02-24-2008, 11:35 AM Re: Review Travel Site
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First off I would get rid of the marquee, I find scrolling text extremely annoying, and in this cas doubly so as it does not scroll smothly.
I have viewed your site using IE 7, FF and Opera and only in Opera does your menu work as I assume you would like. In both IE 7 and FF the curser changes erratically from a pointer to the hand that most people associate with a link.
I originally viewed your site with my speakers muted as I don't usually surf with sound on, but noticed that you had a speaker control so turned my sound on. That was a terrible mistake, why would any one want to read and asorb information with a distracting sound track in the back ground. As a matter of interest I tried out your speaker control and found in the three browsers mentioned above it failed to mute.
You should make it possible for viewers to choose their own font size, especially as you have picked a reletively small size.
At the bottom of the page for gound travel tips you have
Also include which are all important & not mentioned above...
This doesn't lead anywhere.
You need to check your links from various pages as the ones I tried didn't come back to the home page.
Sorry if the above seems like everything is wrong, but it seems a shame to spoil what could be a very good site with some easily put right errors.
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Old 02-24-2008, 12:28 PM Re: Review Travel Site
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Thanks for your feedback. I'll correct myself, with all updates. I wish to express my regards to you, Because I'm in starting stage, I couldn't do that website, in pakka manner. I'll serve you better in future.

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At the bottom of the page for gound travel tips you have
Also include which are all important & not mentioned above...
This doesn't lead anywhere.
Ofcourse, I didn't give any links to that.

Also I have rectified all links back to home

Expecting you valuable suggestions in deep future.

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Old 02-24-2008, 04:50 PM Re: Review Travel Site
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it doesn't look like a legitimate site! from the name to the colours scheme, there's nothing there that would make me stay.

the hover on the nav is crap. there's a picture of a mercedes (?) in the header: why?!

lose the music -
red on a lilac background? nice colour combo - not

you have line breaks in weird places e.g. travel tips page and ...

well i can't be bothered with it and i doubt anyone else can.

start again,
choose relevant graphics and a co-ordinated colour scheme. put something short in the header about what the site is for.
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Old 02-24-2008, 05:03 PM Re: Review Travel Site
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All the flash is annoying, the music too, get rid of the music. Make your own template, don't use a free one. At least use a real title. Just seriously, learn HTML and CSS and use them. What's with the huge banner ad? Get rid of the marquee, really just start over from scratch. I know that it's a site I'd skip in a second without thinking.
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Old 02-24-2008, 09:43 PM Re: Review Travel Site
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I think you should get rid of the marquee, they weren't cool 10 years ago and they're still not cool now.

The color scheme is awful, just my opinion, the text is hard to read, and you should run a spell check through your site, I saw several spelling mistakes...
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Old 02-24-2008, 11:24 PM Re: Review Travel Site
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Thanks for your valuable suggestions. Being in a starting stage, This may happens.

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I'm now working on your suggestion. Please get back to my site, & give your review again.

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