Tycoon Talk
Become a Big fish!
The number 1 forum for online business!
Post topics, ask questions, share your knowledge.
Tycoon Talk is part of Freelancer.com - find skilled workers online at a fraction of the cost.

Website Review and Suggestions


You are currently viewing our Website Review and Suggestions as a guest. Please register to participate.
Login



Reply
Critical review of my website
Old 09-06-2006, 05:40 AM Critical review of my website
Junior Talker

Posts: 52
Trades: 0
Hello.
I want to ask some help to improve my store layout.
I need honest criticism about how my store look like
so I can improve / change it.
:helpsmilie:

Below is my address.
Thankx in advance.


----------------------------------------------------
__________________

Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
profithappiness is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
 
Register now for full access!
Old 09-06-2006, 05:47 AM
Junior Talker

Posts: 14
Trades: 0
Hey, mallgreat, the layout looks good but the pink is a little loud. Some areas of description were difficult to read.
pizazz is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Old 09-06-2006, 06:25 AM
Game Producer's Avatar
Making games

Posts: 114
Trades: 0
Hmm... instead of " Feel Free to Browse Any Items" in the headline, why not put the store name with a one line description what the site is all about.
__________________

Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
- My Blog
Game Producer is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit Game Producer's homepage!
 
Old 09-06-2006, 10:39 AM
Ineedalife's Avatar
Junior Talker

Posts: 27
Trades: 0
I would change the dark pink text to a white or a brighter color to change, as right now like they said it can be a bit hard to read. The template is alright for what you are looking to do.
__________________
All your designing needs in these 3 sites. -
Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
-
Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
-
Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
Ineedalife is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit Ineedalife's homepage!
 
Old 09-06-2006, 10:42 AM
Banned

Posts: 67
Trades: 0
not very good.
Ed_bloggo is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Old 09-06-2006, 10:45 AM
Ineedalife's Avatar
Junior Talker

Posts: 27
Trades: 0
Ed_bloggo - Please post something helpful, you have been posting quick posts for who knows what reason, please put in some criticism, not just by telling them their site isn't good, but tell them what you think they can do to change it.

I apologize to - profithappiness for posting it here, but it bothers me when people don't help others out, especially when this is what the forum is about.
__________________
All your designing needs in these 3 sites. -
Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
-
Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
-
Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
Ineedalife is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit Ineedalife's homepage!
 
Old 09-10-2006, 01:41 AM
Junior Talker

Posts: 52
Trades: 0
I would like to Thanks Pizazz,Game Producer,Ineedalife and Ed Bloggo
for giving an useful advice and also yours valuable time .Even though only
5 replies,but I really appreciate it ! Thanks Again.

+ Hi Ineedalife +
You don't have to apologize. Indeed I want to show my gratitude in
return for your honesty.You know,hard to meet people like you
nowadays.
Maybe I will consult with you in future about website design.
+++++++++++++
__________________

Please login or register to view this content. Registration is FREE
profithappiness is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Old 09-10-2006, 05:05 PM
Junior Talker

Posts: 16
Trades: 0
Honestly, I like how the content is arranged and it looks nice. However, I am not a fan of how the sidebars look.

The sidebars don't seem to mesh well with the content. I also think there are too many colors on the page. But other than that, its not bad, but its not great.
Datasta is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Reply     « Reply to Critical review of my website
 

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off





   
RSS Feed  Feeds: RSS   JS   XML
RSS Feed  Feeds for this forum: RSS   JS   XML



Page generated in 3.31292 seconds with 12 queries