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Old 06-04-2008, 04:29 AM Critique Needed
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Hi!

I have improvised on my website since my last review thread.

There is always a scope of improvement......

Please visit my website and post your feedback and suggestions here.

http://www.aviationearth.com

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PS. If possible please bookmark / digg my website (there is a button on the homepage)
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Old 06-04-2008, 07:17 AM Re: Critique Needed
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It's not bad. I like the logo and your site has a clearly set color scheme.

It looks like it needs a bit more content on the front page. . .and perhaps a bit more graphical content in the sidebar instead of having a lot of white all over the place. This also goes for the footer.

Also push the sidebar down a bit. Currently, it's too close to your search box and it makes the site look a little squished.

All in all though it's not bad.

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Old 06-04-2008, 08:17 AM Re: Critique Needed
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I think your site is quite good, i really like the design and the logo's, and the colour scheme you use for the template, overall you've done a great job!
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Old 06-04-2008, 11:08 AM Re: Critique Needed
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Thanks guys!!
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Old 06-04-2008, 12:33 PM Re: Critique Needed
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I don't have the time to review the site, sorry, but I would like to point out that Wiktionary notes that:
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The word aircraft is a countable noun, but with the same plural form as singular; hence "one aircraft", "two aircraft", etc.
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Old 06-04-2008, 12:57 PM Re: Critique Needed
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Is this a free template? I've seen it before in a packaged core of CSS templates.
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Old 06-04-2008, 02:15 PM Re: Critique Needed
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  • The colors are good and the integration menu+search is easy to use.
  • I find the text rather small, it doesn't match the glossy aspect of the menu and also creates useless empty space. It makes it harder to read as well.
  • There's a small bug in safari with the menu:
  • The code is a bit messy (too many tables, <a> nested in divs instead of just <a>s...).

    For instance instead of:
    HTML Code:
    <div align="center"><a href="http://aviationearth.com/aircraftdata/747.html">Boeing 747</a></div>
    <div align="center"><a href="http://aviationearth.com/aircraftdata/767.html">Boeing 767</a> </div>
    <div align="center"><a href="aircraftdata/787.html">Boeing 787</a></div
    All you need is
    HTML Code:
    <a href="http://aviationearth.com/aircraftdata/747.html">Boeing 747</a>
    <a href="http://aviationearth.com/aircraftdata/767.html">Boeing 767</a>
    <a href="aircraftdata/787.html">Boeing 787</a>
    plus a text-align:center; in whatever your list is wrapped in.
  • Do you need a digg button? "Bookmark this page" makes sense, but the big prominent digg counter isn't really in tune with the kind of website it's on (more a repository of data than a timely hype).
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Old 06-04-2008, 02:42 PM Re: Critique Needed
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Hi!

I have improvised on my website since my last review thread.

There is always a scope of improvement......

Please visit my website and post your feedback and suggestions here.

http://www.aviationearth.com

Thank You

PS. If possible please bookmark / digg my website (there is a button on the homepage)
Lovely site. Neat, clean, pleasing to the eye. Has a nice fresh look about it. Good job.
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Old 06-05-2008, 04:36 AM Re: Critique Needed
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it really looks good.
clean & crisp. the color use is very relaxing to the eyes.
and it's easy to navigate around the site.
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Old 06-05-2008, 05:49 AM Re: Critique Needed
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It look beautiful. The only comment I have is - no graphics just text. A few graphic / images can make a difference.
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Old 06-19-2008, 09:44 AM Re: Critique Needed
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I got a new graphic designed for the home page!
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Old 06-19-2008, 09:49 AM Re: Critique Needed
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needs more improvement...just little improvement..hehehe
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Old 06-25-2008, 06:23 AM Re: Critique Needed
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needs more improvement...just little improvement..hehehe
very funny! *sarcasm*
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Old 06-25-2008, 10:55 AM Re: Critique Needed
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Very clean and simple I like it. I would replace the tables in "Aircraft Data" and wrap them in one of those rounded blue boxes you use everywhere else, for consistency.
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