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Old 06-04-2008, 06:17 AM Please help me check on my new website
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Hi everyone , Recently , I am updating my website http://www.mannequins.org.cn/greatwallemb/index.html,but i am not sure if it is ok , Could you give me some comments ?

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Old 06-04-2008, 07:13 AM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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I got a Chinese (not sure but it looks oriental) 404 page error.

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Old 06-04-2008, 09:13 AM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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Well you included ,but in the link so it would make that easier to take out xD

On the actual page, the second block of text overlaps with the 'Moose Legion Service' image and text below it. You might want to fix that. I'm using Safari 3 fyi.

Other than that I think the colors need some work. My eye shouldn't be drawn to the example images first--which it is. Add in some more contrast to balance out those, especially on the logo. You need something to draw the eye away from those images and to the places you want people to look--at your logo and services. Making the 'What we do' section in a larger font or different (darker!) color would also probably help =)
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Old 06-04-2008, 10:36 AM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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thanks very much ! Any other question ? Please ,
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Old 06-04-2008, 10:38 AM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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sorry , The website is http://www.mannequins.org.cn/greatwallemb/index.html ,
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Old 06-04-2008, 02:30 PM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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As PeachyJuice said, there's a problem with the 2nd header overlapping with an image. Same problem in FF3rc1, IE8 and Opera 9.22.

I didn't have any problem with the colors but the menu on the right looks a bit cheap compared to the header. If you really want to use images instead of text for your menu, try to leverage the typographic freedom you gain by doing so.

The pricing table isn't very clear. Look at websites like basecamp or mint or basically any website that offers different pricing options: you can make the matrix easy to read with very little work.

I didn't run any test but briefly looking at the code your site seems accessible. Just one thing try to replace your header with some image replacement technique. I don't think I would get any info about the title of your page using lynx for instance, and it's also better for SEO to have one semantically relevant <h1>.
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Old 06-04-2008, 02:40 PM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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Hi everyone , Recently , I am updating my website http://www.mannequins.org.cn/greatwallemb/index.html,but i am not sure if it is ok , Could you give me some comments ?

TIA

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All i got was a page with a bunch of question marks????
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Old 06-04-2008, 07:15 PM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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Old 06-08-2008, 06:40 AM Re: Please help me check on my new website
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Jack remove "but" from the link because it redirects to a 404 Forbidden

and I liked the design simple and usable, except for the font used in the awards image it looks like you did it with windows paint lol
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