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Old 06-14-2008, 08:36 AM Car Wallpapers - new site
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please give my site www.desktopcar.net some suggestions to get high ranking on google.

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Old 06-14-2008, 09:02 AM Re: Car Wallpapers - new site
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I can see you spent a lot of time working on your site now spend time working on your meta tags

Code:
<TITLE></TITLE>
<meta name="robots" content="index,follow">
<meta name="description" content=" ">
<meta name="keywords" content=" ">
<meta name="author" content=" ">
<meta name="abstract" content=" ">
<meta name="copyright" content=" ">
<meta name="revisit-after" content="days">
<meta name="reply-to" content="">
<meta name="document-classification" content="Internet">
<meta name="document-rights" content="Copywritten Work">
<meta name="document-type" content="Public">
<meta name="document-rating" content="Safe for Kids">
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Old 06-14-2008, 03:59 PM Re: Car Wallpapers - new site
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First Impression

"Black!"

Design

I'm going to use a list format, because I feel like doing such. Here are my initial suggestions.

#1 - Get a logo. Logo = branding. If you do not have a logo, one can be provided for you. You have the rights to it. (haha...miranda law...)
#2 - get a color scheme going. Black & white doesn't count unless you're going for minimalist or using grayscale.
#3 - separate your content! It feels amazingly cluttered.
#4 - center the site, or give the empty space a purpose.

Now then, onto some more details. You're content is in a sea of black. It's structured, which is great. You always want a good foundation, but it needs some tweaking. There are boundaries broken here and there, and it's cluttered. Then you need to go to step 2, and add your colors. Then images, then typography. Speaking of your typography, the links in the sidebar are extremely tiny. It's very hard to read. Your idea of using borders is a good one, but not if they're broken by overflow and elements squishing one another in. The ads are in awkward places, and I'm not digging the dark gray with black text thing on each picture description.

Content

Ugh....cars...so boring...kidding. Cars aren't my thing, but this is an image gallery, and you do have a fair amount of pictures. It took me forever to get to a full view of one though. You need to define, exactly, what is a category, and what is a download-able item! Otherwise visitors will be lost, just because they want a picture of that Porsche.

Would I Use It?

I'm still trying to figure out how to download that Porsche...

Overall

Solidify the structure, put the ads in places that aren't awkward, give your elements some space, then go for colors. (Get a logo) and then fix the way your content is accessed. Then go for some polishing and decide on your goals before moving on.
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Old 06-14-2008, 05:24 PM Re: Car Wallpapers - new site
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I'm not liking the color scheme, it's way toooooo dark. The google ads in the center of the page are overwhelming, you might want to split it up. It took a loooooong time to download some pics. The lack of a title, log, etc at the top of your home page was disconcerting - at first, I wasn't sure if the link you provided had dropped me into the middle of your site somewhere. You might want to figure out something, even if it's just a simple box around the words.
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Old 06-15-2008, 03:58 AM Re: Car Wallpapers - new site
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@OleTom: How do you know I spent too much of time for this site? And I'll add all needed meta tag.

Sneakyheathen, goldnite: Thank you so much. I'll kindly read and translate all word you give me.

All comments always welcome!

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Old 06-15-2008, 08:29 AM Re: Car Wallpapers - new site
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I can see you spent a lot of time
I said a lot of time not too much time.

Well it took a lot of time to find and upload all those pictures and you must love cars so I'm sure you took your time to make sure all the pictures were just right.

Am I wrong
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Old 06-16-2008, 04:42 AM Re: Car Wallpapers - new site
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i only have one question? why is that your "login" at the bottom... i think it should be place somewhere were the visitor could see it.
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