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First Impression
"It reminds me of....kindergarten?"
Design
A few initial suggestions, or actually, just one: center the page. Now I'm gonna go in hardcore. Firstly, if it's an image host, it should at least be wide enough to view the whole image in! The elements you're employing are kind of cheesy (flashing/animated/multicolor gifs? 1990's ahoy!) And your poor layout is desperately trying to be a 'shroom, and failing.
Top to bottom, The wrapper around the content is fscked up on the top left corner, the logo looks...bad, and the Polaroid effect you're going for isn't working. It mostly looks overcrowded. The navigation is, okay. The searchbar is too small. Mushroom man looks too pixely/grainy, again, the flashing .gif is cheesy. Some of the pictures don't load (actually, I should say that ONLY FOUR DO load.) and the footer breaks the page borders. Your contact page just looks plain out of place. My suggestions?
Re-vamp the logo, pick a definitive color scheme, center the page, use structure, first and foremost, and get rid of the animated gifs and '90s graphics.
Content
There are two pictures, and they don't even load within the site itself. I would say that you should employ a system along the lines of flickr or photobucket, rather than just a direct link. The way you've written the content also seems very...kid-like.
Would I Use It?
Not at the moment, nope.
Overall
Structure, color scheme, and update the graphics. In my opinion, it could use a lot of work.
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