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Old 06-24-2008, 01:02 AM New Site
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I just recently designed, and built my new site, its been up for almost a week, I would like to get some ideas, about, it, stuff i should add, or stuff y'all don't like. I can handle harshness, please note, my design skills are not the best, but i done this myself, simple but functional.

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Old 06-24-2008, 01:31 AM Re: New Site
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Simple and clean, but i think it's a bit dark.
I can hardly see the nav manu.
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Old 06-24-2008, 01:43 AM Re: New Site
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The section titles are just killing it.. i think its too much, like you are trying to hard (drop shadow, gradient, cant tell if its beveled?)

I dont know, im just not feeling the overall style of the site. It seems very retro, i dont know if thats how to describe it, but I get the same feeling from the other sites in your portfolio as well.

But im not trying to be discouraging in any way (i know im not the best), but keep on keepin on, practice makes perfect!
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Old 06-24-2008, 01:51 AM Re: New Site
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thats right very simple... you can also try put some thing on the right space...
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Old 06-24-2008, 06:51 AM Re: New Site
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i think that the site design is really simple to me...adding some header image or logo will help.....
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Old 06-24-2008, 07:50 AM Re: New Site
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You can change the green of the menu to some other color to make it easier to see.
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Old 06-24-2008, 09:49 AM Re: New Site
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try posting more adds and and stuff.. and try making your own company logo of some sort so your page wouldn't b e so plain...
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Old 06-24-2008, 03:41 PM Re: New Site
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Your site needs colours images and proper text arrangement
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Old 06-24-2008, 03:56 PM Re: New Site
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definitely a bit dull and dark overall, and very few graphics. It doesnt really catch attention or inspire confidence in your skills, sorry.
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Old 06-25-2008, 06:13 AM Re: New Site
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I agree with what has been mentioned here. The colors are too dark and the blue against the gray just doesnt work well. I would use a bigger font for the text. It's very hard to read. Add some graphics to it, its very dull and unappealing. If I went there to look at the web development portion of it, I would be turned off.

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Old 06-25-2008, 09:21 AM Re: New Site
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Thank you for all the suggestions, I am a code writer, I really don't do designs, but I am learning. I appreciate the critique it will be useful, now I ave to fix some stuff.

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