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Welcome To Woodstock's Garden Of Eve!
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As a tagline, it doesn't really tell me anything about it.
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Just look at this website as, "A Catalog In The Sky".
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How about : "Please look at this website: -- but what is a catalog in the sky? Do you mean it's a catalog of all or most of her work? Do you think anyone surfing the web doesn't already know what a web catalog is? Why is there a comma before the name? (It's not speech, and you might do better to use italics to set the ... well I think you should dump the whole phrase because it doesn't really add anything....)
How is anyone to know there is a link here if there is no way to tell? (Italics do not signal the reader it's a link; so it's not a good choice.) Either use a different color, or preferably, put back in the underline. You don't need underlines in the left-hand menu because its purpose is clear.
And, that left-hand menu -- is that just a list of the kitchen-sink-and-everything? Does she sell all that stuff? Find some sort of higher level organization and break it up. The type is also very small. Oh! I just realized that the A-Z matches the left-hand menu (doesn't it?) (What the heck is Zappy? Isn't that just too cutesy for use?)
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This website is my creative garden.
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And that means what? How would that attract anyone to come into the site?
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As this being a web site the colors may be slightly different from the origonal artwork.
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Original is spelled wrong. "As this being a website" is not grammatical -- do you mean 'because it's a website you have chosen different colors than her artwork'?! Oh, or do you mean, the pictures on the web of the artwork won't show the exact colors of the actual artwork? It's not clear in any case.
There's an odd change in footer height at the right. The URL/website name at top is completely illegible - I have no idea what it says. I like the ... hat with ribbon?... at the top left. I think the site would work better as a commerce site (if that's its purpose, and that's not clear) if it showed more of what she offers -- that one picture she's holding doesn't lead me to want ot enter her site any further.
It is pretty, although it's very much one-color and the color doesn't much go with her artwork shown.
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