http://tinyurl.com/6bd68a:
On a large screen, the length of the text lines becomes so long it's unreadable; max length should be about 40-44ems (60-70 characters).
Really awkward first sentence:
Why we opened a Lightyear business can be expressed in one word.
How about : "We opened a Lightyear.... "
On the wide screen the right-hand white column goes all the way into the heading.
Make their email address an actual link?
The first picture in the gallery is captioned Our house -- but it shows the two people.
The page is nice looking, but really light on substance -- the text is mostly fluff and doesn't tell anyone what the site is about or for.
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