Website Review and Suggestions

**Valiant** · 08-24-2008, 03:04 PM

Just wondering what people thought of the following site. To me its looking crap at the moment although I don't have the design skill to be able to get to grips with what is missing to make it better! Some advice please?

Oh, and please dont post if you're gonna say " nice site, keep up the work" because that is not a review, nor is one paragraph or 4 lines.

Negative, negative, negative criticism please! Obviously so i can improve!

Link: http://deaz
ys-services.com/

Thanks for the review.

**Mr. B** · 08-24-2008, 03:25 PM

http://deazys-services.com/

This is looking great... only two remarks.

Have you tried putting the navbar below the logo, might look better and perhaps there's an advantage to keeping the navigation some distance from the edge.

As you properly have current page highlighting in the navbar, i would remove the "You're browsing:" bar from pages less than three "levels" deep.

**Valiant** · 08-24-2008, 03:34 PM

Thanks... the link was like that on purpose so this page didnt get ranked by google as related to the site.....

**thehuskybear** · 08-24-2008, 04:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Vivid Lust

Thanks... the link was like that on purpose so this page didnt get ranked by google as related to the site.....

Wish I had thought of that when I listed my site for reviews... the forum post showed up before my site in several searches.

BTW.. your site looks good... a little simple, but overall, it has a pleasing layout.

**pramser** · 08-25-2008, 03:19 AM

Hahah, time for some SEO, I suppose.

Great layout though. A bit bare, but with some content it could be incredible. I agree with B on the "You're browsing:" page map thing-a-majigger. Doesn't need to be on the front-page.

On another note, I kind of despise the main page being labeled as 'Index'. I understand it, of course but, uh... what the 'eff? I simply think it could be labeled more accurately.

**Sneakyheathen** · 08-25-2008, 05:46 AM

It's really, really white. I actually can't even make out the footer text. The text feels kind of crammed into the container, as well. I would use a bit more line height. I'm not a major fan of the header, either.

I like the businessman at work feel you've got going, but it's not inherently clear what the site is about. I think the logo could use a bit more work too. The colors don't particularly mesh up well.

It's a really nice layout, but it kind of fades out at the bottom, and the header just doesn't engage you.