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Hi. The graphics look cool. But I'd like to speak about the 'about' section. It's phrased as if you're assuming that anyone who's arrived at the site knows who you are. That makes it look less professional than you would probably like.
For example, look at how the first sentence begins: "It's a site created by myself and 2 friends." If no one knows who you are, that sentence gave us no information.
Assume people got to your site by mistake and that no one knows who you are and what's the site about. And then rephrase everything in the 'about' section.
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