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I need your advice about my new site??
Old 09-12-2008, 12:58 PM I need your advice about my new site??
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Hi everyone!! I'm glad you're reading this.
A few days ago I made my personal website available on the Internet.
It's about hip hop music.
I'm writing here because I want to hear your advices and comments.
Please write.
My site is here:
http://www.hiphopisland.com/index.html

Thanks a lot.
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Old 09-12-2008, 04:20 PM Re: I need your advice about my new site??
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Nice Site , nice graphic
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Old 09-12-2008, 05:21 PM Re: I need your advice about my new site??
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The site looks good, the font type doesn't fit quiet so well though.

Comment me on my site back:
www.gamingfreak.net

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Old 09-12-2008, 06:19 PM Re: I need your advice about my new site??
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random thoughts on this site:

the font you used on this logo is a poor choice as it's not really legible.

the font for each of your links is a poor choice as well. though it's just my opinion, i don't believe cursive fonts belong on the web, unless the theme of your site demands it.

same applies to your headers for each of the containers.

i'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but your section headers "news, gallery, biographies, lyrics" look misaligned with the silver horizontal bar.

back to the header, i'm not sure why you have this vertical green bar at the upper right. i thought it was a hover-over menu of some sort, but it's not.

no matter what page you're in, the "got 2 know" link on the menu is always highlighted green.

i'm not sure why your gallery pages are in a different format from your main site. it looks like a prefab photo gallery system on your site.

you seem to have a bunch of different styled logo of your site scattered throughout the site. i would stick with one logo as your brand and identity.

i just got to your biographies and this is where the font choice fails. no one would even think about reading what's on your site. please stick with a font that's clearer to read.

finally, your site does not have any clear organization. to me, it looks like white space with whatever photos you have and info crammed into it - for example, the animated gif of the stereo speakers on the home page. it reminds me of the angelfire days.

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