Website Review and Suggestions

**acceleratedvs** · 09-18-2008, 04:41 PM

Hey guys any suggestions on my site http://www.acceleratedvs.com thanks in advance

**Watts** · 09-18-2008, 05:31 PM

hey its good, however i have seen this before if i am wrong please correct me, its a template i believe. I reckonise the mouse, fairenough if you havnt got the money to buy a designer we all start like that but try and make them unique to yourself.

**Nirvana** · 09-19-2008, 08:31 AM

I think there is a bit too much white space, evidence of a template as the poster before me pointed out.

I would also punch up the home page content to make it speak to your customers and get the to want to learn more, instead of just providing general information.

Tell you customers why they NEED your service using more benefits.

**bakerc** · 11:54 AM

Hi,

I am no expert either but thought I would make a few comments on what you noted above (I have only noted on the obvious stuff, not trying to pick holes out of it

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#7 Semantic Structure:
According Ravens SEO Analyzer you scored 65 out of 100.

I wouldn't use anythignlike this - complete waste of time.

I had a look at the 'report' it generates and I think thats where you got a lot of your advice from.

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Try to get your content up to at least 300 words per page. Submitting pages with less than that requires really good quality content. Unless you submit your page to the ODP (www.dmoz.org)

Sorry but wrong on both counts. Theres no set number of words or minimum number of words or anything for web pages, its a combination of everything - what does DMOZ do? from everything I have read its days of being a must for SEO have gone (if they can get your snippet and title correct in their listings that is

) but again, I am still arning.

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#7 Semantic Structure:
According Ravens SEO Analyzer you scored 65 out of 100.

Your Web design does contain header elements (i.e. <h1>, <h2>, etc...), but they are not being used properly. Search engines use header elements to determine the context and purpose of your Web page.

Again, sorry but 65 out of 100 of what? this figure is meaningless.

I am suprised you didn't mention backlinks to improve page PR...

From one learner to another -
Waste of digital ink that report, not trynig to be awkward or anything its just the OP might take you at your word - which is fairly off the mark IMHO

Have a look at some of the Q&A in the forum at http://www.highrankings.com/

they also have good aricles etc.

**CodyLoco** · 09-19-2008, 03:07 PM

@Bakerc

How can you flame the help that Pinkerton gave, regardless of the sources or accuracy? He went out of his way to give a serious post about what HE thinks could help the website based on his experiences. Whether you think they are right or wrong does not make his post worthless ink- yours was a the true waste of pixels because all it did was flame and contribute anything to the board, thread, or even his own ideologies.

And before you drop the "I'm a senior on this board and have 1700 posts compared to your 13 posts", I hope you realize that this 'new member' did more to review this person's site than the majority of people that post here just to get their 3-post quota. What good is a "that's a good site" post which is all most reviews end up being?

I'm not inciting a flame war or anything similar, I just wanted to point something out and I don't expect to continue any sort of discussion as to not hijack this thread.

**acceleratedvs** · 09-19-2008, 06:45 PM

Pinkerton I appreciate you taking the time to write a detailed post, thank you.

**chrishirst** · 09-19-2008, 07:00 PM

Actually, had I been here before Carl, the "formulaic clap trap" from the "SEO tools" would have got even more of a slating from me!

Leave these "tools" completely alone, they will drag you down a totally wrong route, this "SEO by numbers" stuff worked reasonably well back in 1998 which is where most of these tools are originally from.

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I hope you realize that this 'new member' did more to review this person's site than the majority of people that post here just to get their 3-post quota. What good is a "that's a good site" post which is all most reviews end up being?

Absolutely, and BTW just report them ( red flag icon

top right of the post) and they will be dealt with.

**Shophilia** · 09-20-2008, 01:38 PM

Looks professional. I would add a favicon. I like the service, I'll be using you in the near future.

P.S Almost freaked out when I entered my own site into that seo tool above. Until I realized amazon scored 40.

**juries23** · 09-23-2008, 11:16 PM

try to improve the color of your site