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Hello!
Congratulations on your website. Both designs look nice. I personally like them both, but for different reasons. The FeatherCode is neat because it's *different* than what we are used to see. But of course Sliced Accordingly looks more professional.
I would have liked to see these paragraph on the main page in order:
"About Us
We take your beautiful design and craft equally beautiful and semantic CSS and X/HTML. You'll recieve your code fast (usually within 24 hours) and for the ultra-affordable starting price of $75 per page. Yes, we're crazy.
Our working hours:
8AM PST to 8PM PST. Monday through Friday. However, if you specify a time constraint we can see about speeding things up a bit, even if it includes working weekends."
"Your Satisfaction Guaranteed
If you request your order to be canceled prior to work begining, your order takes longer than 48 working hours to complete, or you just aren't 100% satisfied, you get your money back! We believe you don't need to pay for something you don't want."
I think this should be the focal point of your website : What you do, and how you do it! This would be especially important for your SlicedAccordingly version. When I first looked at it, I saw the square on the right with the "Order now", yet my attention or interest obviously wasn't already there. Then I saw "your code verified.." so I was still wondering : so what do they do exactly? they verify code? then I saw the total pages x 75$ on the bottom right... so I started to understand that you make "cheap" websites. then I saw the 24 hours and I finally understood.
So my suggestion, if you are going to keep Sliced would be to make the "about us" text the main focal point.
Hope this helps?
PS: a privacy statement available at the bottom next to your copyright would look professional and also please Google's bots. So would a sitemap. Both of which you can put in subtle links next to your copyrights.
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