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Old 11-02-2008, 12:02 AM Please Review My Site
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Old 11-02-2008, 02:23 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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Nice! But need do key words research!
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Old 11-04-2008, 07:31 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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Not so attractive. These types of site should be attractive.
there is lots of gap b/w the lines.

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Old 11-04-2008, 10:32 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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You are right. These types of sites should have attractive look.
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Old 11-04-2008, 11:10 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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The header is very blurry and the layout is a little strange. I would work on making it look more modern and just better looking over all.
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Old 11-04-2008, 02:20 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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Nice site! Love the design
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Old 11-04-2008, 08:25 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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Hello,

The design is very 'blah' and I personally wouldn't buy anything from the website because it doesnt look one bit professional.
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Old 11-04-2008, 08:39 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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Nice site! Love the design
<sarcasm>you're very helpful.</sarcasm>

now regarding the site, the first thing that jumped out at me is that there's so much empty white space. maybe font is too small or not enough content. i don't know.

also, for a site like this, you should probably place the "featured" items above the fold (the images of products at the bottom).
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Old 11-05-2008, 06:41 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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I think that you should focus on the design, simply it does not have an appeal to its users very simple....and adding some features that can caught attention to users!
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Old 11-05-2008, 07:36 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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I feel like a broken record player. But if I was a customer, I would exit almost right away, my eyes are telling me this is an unreliable site because the customization and attention getting isnt there.

Plus its blocky, and blurry as mentioned.

Some pages result in errors and others take you to amazon. I imagine this is most likely a fresh install. But be mindfull of that when releasing to customers!
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Old 11-05-2008, 09:20 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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Need to work on the design a little to make it more appealing to customers.
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Old 11-06-2008, 06:48 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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very nice looking. but change some color.
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Old 11-06-2008, 08:08 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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Yes its nice site..but you can make it more attractive by modify colors.
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Old 11-06-2008, 08:25 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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Hey

with out being rude the site looks a little dated the top half of the page there is not one image

ive added a few tips that you might give you an idea

1. Put some thought into organization.

Think about what content you have and how it should be organized. This is at least as important as what your pages look like, so actually spend some time on it. You do your readers a disservice if they can't easily find what they're looking for if everything is thrown up on your site in a haphazard fashion.


2. Good use of images and colour
Presentation (eg: colours, graphics, icons) can play a big role in reinforcing purchase intent. Avoid clutter. White space and big fonts. Smart layout.

3. Minimize clicking!

Put as few clicks between your visitor and your information as possible. This is so important I'll repeat it: Put as few clicks between your visitor and your information as possible. The more you force your visitors to click around your site the more likely they'll abandon it. Even if they don't leave they might get annoyed, or not view as much of your content -- either of which is bad for you.

Is your home page a splash page (a page with no meaningful information on it, that simply "welcomes" visitors to the site, along with an "Enter Site" link)? If so, get rid of it. After someone takes the effort to visit your site, give them your site right away! Don't make them knock on two different doors.

A related idea is to put meaningful amounts of information on each page. If a page doesn't have at least 400 words, you probably should combine that page with another short page.

Along with minimizing clicking, minimize scrolling, too.

4. Limit page length to 2 screenfuls, or 6-7 screenfuls for articles.

While you should put a lot of info on each page to minimize clicking, don't go too far in the other direction by putting too much info on a page. You should normally limit a page to no more than two screenfuls of info. Articles (like this one) are exceptions, because articles are longer by nature. But even so, very long articles (more than about 6-7 screenfuls) should usually be chunked into separate pages.



ive added a few links of some good shoping sites

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usbnow.co.uk

also this is a new page ive just done check it out

http://www.webmaster-talk.com/websit...ffer-page.html
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Old 11-06-2008, 11:14 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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Okay I will give you some constructive criticism.
1st way too much white space
2nd nasty logo
3rd alot of the text is out of focus
4th are you selling anything or is it just amazon.
add some more colour and make a nice background
hope it helps
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Old 11-06-2008, 11:55 AM Re: Please Review My Site
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Don't change a thing, I just bought something from your website, and it works, browsing site to checkout, there's no problem! That's all that needs to work for me. You got my business.

Thank you!
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Old 11-06-2008, 03:18 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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i dont see the point in the site, why would'nt people just go to amazon because all your selling is their products, and the design isnt that good either
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Old 11-06-2008, 03:37 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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The site looks bland when you first come to the main page, plus the font is too small
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Old 11-06-2008, 03:43 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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Good: It loads really fast (at least to me here in Italy).
Bad: your layout and design looks poor, i suggest you work harder on this.

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Old 11-06-2008, 04:24 PM Re: Please Review My Site
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at the moment your website is in between being a clean or colourful website. If you are going for the clean loom take away the black background for a start. If you are going for the colourful look you need to add graphics, especially on the header
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