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Old 11-10-2008, 03:46 PM Autojonny
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hi,
here is a project ive been working on, please review this for me

www.autojonny.tk
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Old 11-11-2008, 01:58 AM Re: Autojonny
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ummmmm Your Site is ok not not too bad not too good ...if you are working on it please First complete your Work Then post it here for review ...
Over All i don't like your color choice ( just my opinion don't take it hard please)* And Also change your Header Style too ...

i will give you for your work just 4/10

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Old 11-11-2008, 08:02 AM Re: Autojonny
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thx for the opinion,

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Old 11-11-2008, 10:09 AM Re: Autojonny
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I agree with Aquapearl that there is a lot of work to do before it's complete. Try to add a little more of contrast between the background color and the font color...

I checked your three other websites and two of them have great designs, so I'm sure you can improve your personal page! =P
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Old 11-11-2008, 10:42 AM Re: Autojonny
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.tk are not good, try co.cc, so it wont be framed
The css on the buttons is really good, and has a nice feel for it
The homepage text is on the navbar and I don't think it belongs there
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Old 11-12-2008, 08:48 AM Re: Autojonny
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cheers, guys, i do agree, it was something i knocked up in my spare-time in college, its harder making my own website than what it is for my clients,
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Old 11-12-2008, 09:10 AM Re: Autojonny
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Heya, thanks for posting your site for review.

Here are my thoughts...

I use FireFox and when I view your site the background colours don't work so it looks quite messy. You may wish to try your design in a number of browsers to make sure it looks the same on all.

I personally wouldn't center align the text, it's harder to read and would left align it. A title would look ok centered, but for paragraphs of text i would left align.

You need some imagery in there, probably in the header is most important. At the moment your site does have the feel of a 'blog', an image to do with the web or design will help. On your portfolio, you could make it look nicer by using thumbnails of your work next to the links.

Just a few thoughts, hope they help.

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Old 11-12-2008, 09:19 PM Re: Autojonny
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My first notes will be that if you are trying to make a serious go, you will need to be more professional by having a .com and by removing all the spelling errors before we even talk about design.
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Old 11-13-2008, 05:16 PM Re: Autojonny
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I think the site has promise if you spend more time on it. You are in a profitable niche, that is one +++ for it. I think with the right amount of targeted marketing this site can take off, and you will be raking in the money. But until then, you will need to work on beefing up the site for "wow" factor so your customers feel confident in your product. I still struggle with this on my site too, don't feel bad.
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Old 11-13-2008, 07:45 PM Re: Autojonny
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Hello,

I like the color scheme you decided to go with. But, after looking through all your pages I quickly noticed that your pages do not hold that consistency that is an extremely important element with web design. Best of luck to you.
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