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Old 11-20-2008, 12:10 PM Site review of an online portfolio
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I am updating my portfolio and would like some extra eyes to look it over and tell me what you think. None of the links are working just yet and I still have a bit of work to do to optimize the stylesheet, but if you don't mind could you take a look? Don't be afraid to be honest, I can take it.

http://www.johnnjenn.com/john/
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Old 11-20-2008, 12:33 PM Re: Site review of an online portfolio
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sorry but it's tooooo templatey {if thats a word}
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Old 11-20-2008, 07:28 PM Re: Site review of an online portfolio
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i think the word your after is blocky? lol maybe not a really word but its the only word that comes to mind.

also non of your links work?
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Old 11-20-2008, 08:29 PM Re: Site review of an online portfolio
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style the font. all the graphical elements look poorly done. your right-side border image is thicker/different from the left border. no footer - it looks like your site is just suddenly cut off. i would look into stock photos for quality images, rather than simple keyboard images, which just looks bad. re-position that "serving atlanta..." part elsewhere. it looks like it's just floating around. not sure what the link 1, 2, 3 are for when you have a navigation on the left side. copyright text is way too small.

to be honest, i really don't think my comments will really "improve" your site in any way. i would take a look at some designs out there for inspiration and start from scratch.
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