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Old 11-21-2008, 02:27 PM A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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Well.. i'm not very good at this .. but i like to play with colors.. so i made something for my site... but i'm not sure i made something cool... so i need some help here please.. thx

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Old 11-21-2008, 05:24 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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I like the overall look of your site. Your colors seem to work well together. Your content however, leaves a lot to be desired. Based on your content, it seems that English is not your first language. You might want to consider having someone more fluent in the English language review and re-write your content.

Nice job, though
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Old 11-21-2008, 09:57 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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^ i agree. you definitely need to hire a copywriter. your writing is just plain bad. i just don't understand... did you really think people would trust your claims such as in your forum signature - "Web Hosting Best Quality" when you can't even write properly? i wouldn't even trust giving you my email address at sign-up, let alone relying on you for web hosting. i must have found at least 2 places where you've used "u" rather than "you." your faq section is also probably the least informative bits of information i've ever read.
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Old 11-22-2008, 12:04 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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As far as color of your website is concerned they are really sharp and not giving comfort to those people who visited your websites. So you should change it and give such soft and shoothing touch.

Contain which you wrote should be in tabular or step by step. It was sounding like 10 years boy writing an essay.
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Old 11-22-2008, 05:43 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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yes i'm sorry, my first language is romanian and i'm bad on english , i will try to re-write again.. but not me.. ^^ anyway .. thank you for your help.. i will apreciate all reply who will you give me ^^
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Old 11-23-2008, 05:50 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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drop the adverts, they clutter it up and wont make you any money so low down the page anyway!
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Old 11-25-2008, 05:58 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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Hi, the site looks good but I don´t kow if the blues of the page really combine with the green inside the page and in some links on the right...I would stick with one set of colors (blue) or the others (green) for the page....
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Old 11-25-2008, 08:13 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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Your site doesn't look a web hosting site. I think its a blog.
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Old 11-26-2008, 08:44 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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its not a blog... but seems like one ^^ i think to change something... so i need some help... what i can change from the design ?? header.. bg .. footer... all...

and with articles.. i have no-idea what i can write about this .. i need to re-work on forum..
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Old 11-26-2008, 10:34 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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I have no problem with your colors, personally. I did balk at some of the links, where the site visitor is "dumped" onto other sites. I mean when you click on WebDirector, and the Paid Hosting order link, you wind up on a someone else's page that looks very different than your sites pages. Better than me so far, though.
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Old 11-26-2008, 10:42 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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better than you ??... anyway... web director is also mine.. and web hosting paid is not mine.. i only keep him here if someone want a paid hosting..

is an affiliate site ^^ or somtehing like that...
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Old 11-26-2008, 12:41 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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It's looks clean and nice, but I think with better logo your overall looks will improve a lot i guess..
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Old 11-26-2008, 01:14 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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I don't think it was that bad. The colors were fine and the general placement of banners and texts were perfectly ok by my standards. The spelling errors made me back off more than the design did.
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Old 11-26-2008, 01:16 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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well here you are right... but is hard to do all by your self... so will take some time until i will think about a new logo ...

EDIT: i write again with some help, and i think now is better than first time... i think ^^
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Old 11-26-2008, 06:02 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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colors look good to me. I'd get rid of that blank right column. A blank column looks odd to me. If you're thinking of filling it with advertising, the right hand column is the worst place for advertising. English is read left to right and readers eyesight will stop at the end of the text and not progress to ads on the right side. (unless the ad shows a pretty face or cleavage) and that's just the way it is.

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Old 11-26-2008, 11:16 PM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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the logo is amateurish.

the header is like a 'web 2.0' header anywhere, as are the buttons

the blue and the green and yellow don't go together, if you use blue and green thn find a better combination, reduce the saturation of the green too!

DON'T use all bold text, use bold only for emphasis.

doesn't inspire me to pay for hosting
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Old 11-27-2008, 07:47 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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I liked the site, the colors are OK.

My advice is leave of the BOLD words... unless its something important.

but its a nice site...
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Old 11-27-2008, 08:26 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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wow.. oke.. something good and something bad.. oke thank you.. i will remove bold from the first page and hosting plans or others...

web 2.0 ?? is photoshop cs3 ^^ all what you can see word pad and photoshop.. nothing else..
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Old 11-27-2008, 08:29 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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I would choose blue for all links in the right column. I think it would fit better
Your company name should be also redesigned to look more impressive. Currently the header looks very simple
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Old 11-27-2008, 08:32 AM Re: A Review at My Web Deisgn please
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website looking gud have nice shape .. if u want to do better have more hard work for being a gud web master
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