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Old 12-15-2008, 02:54 PM Please review my first website's layout
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I am not yet done with the content, and I really want your suggestions on how to make the design better.
The live preview can be found here: http://obama-net.org/bluelayout/index.html

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Old 12-15-2008, 04:52 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Not that bad, the only major thing is the top left text is hanging off the edge by a LOT.

XP SP2 FireFox 3.0.4

*EDIT* Strange, it looks like either you or FF decided to decrease the bottom padding, now the text fits. Nice job!
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Old 12-15-2008, 05:37 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Its okay but you have the text lagging over the design, I would change the text color
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Old 12-15-2008, 10:08 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Now that you mention it. I just noticed that the text does that when the window's not maximized? Strange.. I gotta look into it. Thank you!
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Old 12-16-2008, 06:44 AM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Hi, It's a good attempt, certainly if it's your first website, you need to fix up your div's a little bit, some of the positioning is off, aside from that, I would say that the website looks just a little too busy, when I visit, I'm not sure where I should focus first.

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Old 12-16-2008, 07:22 AM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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^I think your right, the positioning is not properly align, and some adjustment on the color will do!
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Old 12-16-2008, 09:46 AM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Not bad, i would only prefer if that inframe woundlnt be there. But the decision is up to you.
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Old 12-16-2008, 11:32 AM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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First, It's a bright and clear design.
Second, I think you need replace the left hand frame by some ways else (e.g, leader by three post and after that by list of header...)

Sorry if there's something wrong in my words, 'cause it says about Obama. It's a big name.
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Old 12-16-2008, 04:50 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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It's lacking something at the top. But I love the artistic design, I think that will appeal to a lot of people. The alignment is still a problem, the table appears to be centered while the information is right aligned. I didn't look at the code, so I'm not sure exactly what's going on. I would also make the headings a little larger to draw attention to certain areas. I think with all the clutter (the well designed, and very well laid out clutter... don't change it - I don't mean it in a bad way) the text is getting lost in the middle.
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Old 12-16-2008, 05:22 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Full of pictures, good design, lots of contents and good links. I thinks it's a good site. By the way did you design it yourself?
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Old 12-16-2008, 06:01 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Good, but the first issue still hasn't been resolved as of yet.
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Old 12-16-2008, 08:22 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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I looks great besides the small portion of the right column that runs off the right side in firefox. Was this developed for 800x600 resolution or which? Looks good to me, are you getting a bunch of traffic to it now?
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Old 12-16-2008, 10:34 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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I can't really figure out why the text is doing that !! I'm working on revising my code.

&& yes capik I designed it myself. =]

Thank you guys so much for your feedback! I will get on fixing the problem ASAP so I can finally open the website.
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Old 12-17-2008, 02:57 AM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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The art work on the site is good. But, I'd recommend compressing the banner/navigation block. You'll want some more of the content section visible to people visiting the site for the first time with a low-ish screen resolution (think people with small laptops).

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Old 12-17-2008, 05:19 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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I think I fixed the problem ! Can you guys please check in your browsers? Thank you ! =]
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Old 12-17-2008, 06:50 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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I don't think you fixed it, it seems to be pushing to the right (firefox) I've had a look at the code and a lot of it is wrong, you should look at a few CSS tutorials, certainly from a positioning point of view.

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Old 12-17-2008, 06:50 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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busy but nice looking site
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Old 12-17-2008, 08:53 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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its very slow! I think images are heavy and make it center.
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Old 12-17-2008, 10:26 PM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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=/ frustrating. I'm going to have to go on my other computer to work on it. Thank you guys for letting me know.
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Old 12-18-2008, 04:57 AM Re: Please review my first website's layout
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Hi there,
I think you've got it now, centers nicely and looks a lot tidier.
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