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Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklaces
Old 12-31-2008, 03:46 AM Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklaces
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Looking to have site reviewed. This is for an eco friendly earth friendly hemp jewelry and accessory shop. Site sells handmade one of a kind custom hemp necklaces,
custom hemp chokers, custom hemp bracelets, custom hemp anklets, custom hemp belts, custom hemp dog collars,custom hemp dog leashes, and custom hemp cat collars. Orders are made custom and are personalized. Customers can choose the type of beads they want to use with the item. Wooden beads, glass beads, letter beads to spell out pets name, pony beads, shells and much more. The hemp webbing is also another custom option. Look forward to all of your kind comments and suggestions. Thank you for your time.

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http://www.geocities.com/hemppets

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• Design
• SEO
• Content

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Old 12-31-2008, 06:47 PM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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Quickly, I cannot get past the background on the home page. It is too busy for my tastes. I am having trouble focusing on the content. Try a solid color or a muted texture. Also, the background is not consistent from page to page.

The layout is nice.

Have you thought about hosting somewhere with your own domain name. GoDaddy has hosting for about $4.50 per month. I think people feel much more comfortable purchasing from a non geo cities domain....


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Old 01-02-2009, 09:54 PM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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To be brutally honest, why not just use a proper html template to start with? The content is good, and i like the idea, but the way it's being presented is not ideal.

You don't even need programming skills. I use Dreamweaver CS3 and it lets me modify the template any way i want quickly and easily. The biggest stumbling block i had to overcome to was to realize that you can select cells by holding down the 'ctrl' key and clicking it. That is key! With that knowledge, you will be able to modify the template any way you want.

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Old 01-03-2009, 02:13 PM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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The site has had a few minor modifications and upgrading.
New feature has been added for the paypal buy now button.
Paypal also has a shopping cart option which I plan on looking
into to make the experience easier. Everything on the site
is made custom and is personalized. The individual handmade
items are unique. Its a balance for the custom order forms
and other payment options. The design of the site and presentation
of the site is what I am concerned with. Would love to hear
back from any of you.
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Old 01-05-2009, 10:28 PM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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Wow, not very nice looking. Are you keeping it on geocities?

However, if you are making all this stuff yourself I might be interested in selling it on the site that I'm creating...a pet gifts site. PM me if interested.

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Old 01-07-2009, 08:40 PM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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The design needs work, the site would look much better if you got a professional template.
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Old 01-08-2009, 03:23 PM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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The design is not very nice looking, try use a CMS like Wordpress or Joomla and search for Free Templates.
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Old 01-15-2009, 12:12 AM Re: Please Review Custom Personalized Hemp Jewelry & Accessory Shop Hemp Pet Necklac
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I'm sorry if I sound way too negative, but then, you put websites up here to be critiqued, right?

Website is bad because:


1) You should get rid of the background image of the content. It looks far too busy. and instead of it, replace it with a sort of off-white color, or a light gray. And through out the website, when you click on things, lots of different aspects of the design change. It is very disorienting and is not good. You should like to an external css file so they can all be consistent.

2) The font. It should be smaller, it should not be times new roman.

3) The links. (take a look at reason 2) They SHOULD NOT get bigger when you mouse over them. It's a very bad design choice and it completely disrupts the website, and there should not be a background color on them either.

4) Get rid of unnecessary content and distracting elements. For example:

What is that weird shiny thing and those blue lines? Take them out. One mistake that a lot of beginning web designers make is putting unnecessary content that they think is cool. What is that weird-gif-color-thing at the bottom of the page? It is very visually distracting and ugly. Take it out.
And what's this??

It's ugly and distracting as well. Take it out.

5) Ugly design content. You should always stay away from borders. whatever you do. Take that border that is around the main content and the sidebar out. It is ugly and it does not match.

Sorry. Nothing personal, you know. I really am negative aren't I? If I see anything more, I'll tell you.
Hope it helps!
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